Reviews for Becoming Whole
JenEvan chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
To see things from Prowl's POV is interesting, to know that under all the statistics and coldfacts he usually present, lies a deeply caring spark; but it is also sad, seeing how little he valued himself. And the beautiful ending, where he is finally complete; no longer alone.
Alathea2 chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
I liked this story. Very interesting take on Prowl. Thank you for sharing it.
Ell Bee Someone Else Now chapter 1 . 1/30/2012
Quiet nicely done. Very well-crafted indeed.
Thalanee chapter 1 . 1/30/2012
*gapes* How come no one has reviewed this story yet? It's way too good to have no reviews!

I really enjoyed reading this, you portrayed Prowl's personality beuatifully, as well as his interaction with the others. The last part especially was very touching and the final sentence made it all the better.

I'm looking forward to reading more from you! *sneaks carrots for the bunnies* ;D