This fanfic was very interesting.

He's going to give her a Geass?

I was half hoping he'd start his revolution anew to free his world from it's shackles.

A very, very disturbing read.

If you wanted to tell us how immortality is more of a curse than a gift, you managed to do so incredibly well. This has to be the most heartbreaking and frightening portrait of Lulu I've ever seen in fiction, canon or not - a pathetic, hollow being too entangled in a past that will never come back, just as the dead will never rise again.

Also, the ending seems open to interpretation, but my best guess is that, if Lulu is immortal like C.C., then poor Yuri is going to be the one who will inherit his curse - a neverending cycle, he's not the first, and he won't be the last.

Have him go and make a speech to the world give it art... Meaning please post soon

Just had to log in again after re-reading this and say that it is truly fantastic, one of my favorites. I'd give it a more thorough review filled with oohs and ahhs at every moment it thrilled me, but part of me feels it would be disrespectful to the sepulchral silent solemnity that hangs about this story to write more than just a few lines.

Splendid. It's wonderful to see an anonymous stranger of my generation with such talent and such similar eccentric tastes as mine. Bravo! Would love to see another chapter, if you can.

I think it is very pretty :)

your story is astonishing. so awesome, until it can envelops me with all that bitter feelings he feel. I know, some people want eternity. they write about eternal life, of the Undead. (not zombie, of course)
again, I feel this way; "Why people want eternity while life is beautiful because it would end someday?"

I'm not a good reviewer, I have to admit. but your story succesfully chilled me.

A very dark and strange tale.

The feeling I got from this makes me think Shakespeare himself wrote the story, which says a lot about your writing. I particularly liked that Lelouch re-enacted Hamlet (although I don't know what it's about). It was quite enjoyable.

I do like how this story is original and gives off a new vibe to the Code Geass fanfic world, even though I have issues with necrophilia and incest (I refuse to think Lelouch loves Nunnally in that way). This story is simply a wondrous piece of Lelouch's dark side, and it will haunt my mind for a while.

Great job.

Wow, This is good. got this idea from Warhammer 40K?

Ill admit most of these parts creeped me out. I was probably as confused as Yuri; however, I did like this. I felt that Lelouch spoke too differently from cannon, but the gist was there. I'm glad this was a one-shot because as a multi-chapter story this wouldn't get as much attention. Too many OCs would be made as well as it would probably get over complicated. As of now it's great though.

Perfect ambiguous ending is perfect.

I would say Lelouch speaks far more archaically than normal and occasionally your words got a little minced or difficult to understand but it's quite the idea you have here. Lelouch is almost a little Norman Batesy in your characterization.

You've taken a different view of the Requiem and Lelouch's alleged immortality than most people and I applaud you for originality. Time really has left him behind here, hasn't it? I do wonder how he plans to bring the world back to it's roots and return progress to the world as well as culture though.

Also I wonder...it seemed as though you were implying that Lelouch accidentally killed Nunnally somehow or in any case she died young. How does that work exactly? What happened with him?

Your original character was a little bland but for it malliable in personality and I do like that she had the balls to tell Lelouch what she thought. Anyways overall you did good work here!

~Crisi

Great job :D

this is amazing!i love the way you portray lelouch and the current world around continue this

This story is...Incredible. I truly admire your writting style. I have no advice to give since I myself am a very inexperienced writter. All I can tell you is to, please, keep writting this story.

P.S. Are you a phylosopher

(Sorry about my english, it is not my native language)

-Llanet