I enjoyed this unexpected piece. Although slow, it's rich and warm - not to mention completely believable.

awh, that was very cute. i’ve always loved like older/younger sibling relationships (preferably older brother/younger sister ones), and this was very lovely to read. as much as i love reading angst isn’t this Phandom, i also hate seeing danny so hurt/conflicted and always glad when someone’s there to support him. thanks for over-analyzing fer us, it’s nothing to be embarrassed by at all. i WISH i can do the same, but not only is there a lack of ppl that share my tastes, my attention span doesn’t allow me to do that fer long periods of time, lol. thanks again.

I loved how refreshing this is!

This was wonderful. :) I loved it, thanks so much for writing and sharing it with us!

Ha, Jazz is my role model as far as big sisters go :3

This was a very enjoyable read. I loved the way that you delved deeper into Danny and Jazz's relationship and how it all centered around Danny's thoughts about his evil future self. It was quite an interesting insight into both of their mindsets. The pace of this story was also just right. You interpreted how the siblings would communicate with each other perfectly. It honestly felt as though this was a detailed insight episode of the actual show.

Also, as a side note, I appreciated how you added the quotes from the Bible be it purposeful towards religion or something else.

All in all, this is a great read that was well written.

This is lovely.
The parallel between being neither/both ghost and human and being (half?) "Dark Danny" is something I haven't seen before.
Don't worry about over-analyzing stories you enjoy; there's no such thing.

Wow. This... this is absolutely fantastic. I love how you set it up to explore both the dialogue from Spectra AS WELL AS all of the trauma that TUE brings out. Because if there's one thing that's worse than either of those episodes on the poor guy's brain, it's both of them together. But they would definitely haunt him and I think come after him in the night when his fears and doubts and memories and nightmares collide.

I'm so glad that he went to Jazz! That he felt he could trust her to listen to him and help him work stuff out and figure out who and what he is. He really needed someone else who knows him and what he's going through and Jazz is the perfect concerned pesky older sister to help him the way he needs it. The dialogue and banter between them here in the middle of the night was great!

And just everything you discussed and analyzed and theorized about everything was brilliant and touching and intense and personal and emotional and so very well done and oh man I really love this so much!

That was an awesome story! Faved!

Cute story! Keep up the good work!

Awww.. That was so sweet. And you're right, meeting an evil future version of himself would definitely scar Danny, most likely for life. Thank goodness Jazz wants to be a psychologist.

This is brilliant. Please write more Danny fics? :3

this is awesome love that you are not afraid to let the characters feel or show emotions. you have got the whole of the characters right. and i love your writing style. you should write a book you are very good.

Really good job :) Great job exploring the deepness of the conflict and working in the quotes about love and actions in a setting they're probably not often connected with :P Fabulous work. God really has blessed you with a talent for writing, and the fact that you bring that to the internet I think is so cool. Keep up the phenomenal work, I can't wait to read more of your writing again soon!

God bless! :)

:D awwwwww Jazz is always lookin out for her little bro :D great writing style.

:D danny angst...almost love it as much as robin angst :D