Reviews for Fate's Hand At Play |
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Christina Werkheiser chapter 6 . 6/27 loved this story.. I don't really see many Seth x Bella stories so thank you! |
Theadosia57 chapter 6 . 6/23 Loved it, a grown-up Seth is very nice indeed xx Alexis |
Pier chapter 6 . 4/24 I am late to find this lovely story and to read it ! What a marvellous tale. Thank you. |
tinkerbear10 chapter 6 . 4/22 I like it a lot! |
Kemq chapter 6 . 2/11 Great story. |
XxTinkerBella21xX chapter 6 . 8/17/2019 I LOVED YOUR PORTRAYAL OF SETH AND BELLA! |
XxTinkerBella21xX chapter 4 . 8/17/2019 lol you're darn right I want a physical from dr. Clearwater |
Kmpcarter chapter 6 . 7/27/2019 I'm sorry your stuff got stolen. I am still new to fanfiction. I didn't know there are other sites. |
ObsidianDraconis chapter 6 . 7/23/2019 Snarky, sparkly, all knowing. That how Peter would probably want to be described. Lmao. This was good. |
ObsidianDraconis chapter 5 . 7/23/2019 That is not the way you propose Seth Clearwater! |
ObsidianDraconis chapter 4 . 7/23/2019 Good for Jake. I always thought it stupid that the pack deferred to the elders. I could understand being respectful of them because they were the elders but running the pack should have always been up to the alpha, period. They need the pack, the pack don’t need them. I do wonder if Charlotte is right about them being mortal though. If you do here like your other stories, Seth and Bella don’t actually ever need to die...of natural causes anyway. |
ObsidianDraconis chapter 3 . 7/23/2019 See. I knew if they’d met each other that they’d consider a little more. Seth couldn’t wait at all could be? Lmao |
ObsidianDraconis chapter 2 . 7/23/2019 She definitely has a right to be offended by the way they talk about vampires, but the constant speaking about how they’re odd. She’s doing exactly what she’s accusing them of doing. Basing her assumptions on things she feels uncomfortable about and not taking an effort to get to know them. I think if her little vamp family cane around and the pack took a moment they’d understand why she loves them and if she took a moment to be around the pack she’d understand them too. Im a little disappointed in her for being so close minded. All they know is how bad vampires are, what they’ve been told. They’ve never seen the good side. Just as she hasn’t seen what the pack really is like. |
ObsidianDraconis chapter 1 . 7/23/2019 Alice went into a little too much detail. Too bad Emmett and Rose kinda suck in this. Edward being gay is hilarious. Now he’s with boring, paranoid Alistair. Oh life must be grand for him. |
CoSmO333 chapter 6 . 6/15/2019 love this story thanks for sharing! |