Reviews for Just Be Friends |
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Astrid Claire chapter 11 . 3/1/2014 HEY! I hope you update soon! This story was only updated since 2012! This is a good story so don't abandon it! PLEASE! Some quick notes: Everyone calls Tezuka "Buchou" except for the third years. Try using "Tsukiko-chan" instead of "Moon Child". The latter is the meaning of the former anyway, and Eiji imitates that concept by calling Fuji "Fujiko". I advice you to keep up the slow process since romance is more exciting that way, but continue showing signs only in a discreet way. This goes for both Tezuka and Fuji. In my opinion, you're going a bit too slow with Tezuka, and a bit too fast with Fuji. The matter with Ringo is also a bit too fast. She trusted Yuu too easily with her feelings for Tezuka before a deeper friendship could develop between them. Try to lessen Tsuki's overreaction sometimes (her apologies and crying), since it could get annoying. I mean, she might become no better than Sakuno if this keeps up. Your story format could also improve. These notes are just advices, and I hope you find no offense within them. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
Lumi yoshinigama chapter 11 . 10/30/2012 pls more chappies! |
Miss-Shadow chapter 11 . 9/17/2012 I love this story! I'm secretly rooting for Fuji x OC! Hope you can update soon! |
CitizensOfThemyscyra chapter 9 . 4/9/2012 Nee so nice story you have here kai-san! I also make fujixOCxtezuka story but it sucks. Unlike yours, its really fun to read |
Quietjay21 chapter 2 . 2/7/2012 This story is very good so far. I love how you are introducing Yuu in these first two chapters, it gives the story a better starting foundation. Please update soon. :) |