Reviews for Tracking Tak
leftffnet chapter 3 . 3/13/2008
I love it so far.

Can't wait to read the rest. C:

-DATR_fan13
inomztietuseoe chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
Yes, it was fluffy and gooey, but well-written fluff-goo! Kudos to you!
otherrealmwriter chapter 2 . 9/12/2007
That is so good! I love DATR
person chapter 3 . 3/31/2007
Your so wonderful you have to write more, you've set every thing up so perfectly please i begg of you write more!
TallestCora chapter 3 . 11/15/2006
WOW! That's...very good! I like it!

Keep it up, PITTY-PEAS!

I like Gooey-Fluff!

SOMEONE: EW! I think I stepped in somthing!

ME: Whoops! Sorrys! That's my "Chrysanthemum" story!
HYPA gal33355555 chapter 3 . 5/14/2006
OMG! Totally cute! Aw... You should have them actually meet and get another chance.
Malonlon chapter 1 . 9/3/2005
wow this is a good story!
The Fic Lord chapter 3 . 3/23/2005
Update!
Kathryn Christine Starcrafter chapter 3 . 4/29/2004
Wow... I really like this. I hope you write more like this
howdoyoudeletethesethingsargh chapter 3 . 12/21/2002
Oh, I just LOVE this so far. -adds to favorites- I haven't seen that many Dib/Tak fics at ALL. And I like the pairing alot...mhmm. This really made my day. Mostly because the rest of the day sucked, and this made me really happy, but anyway...

Really well-written, too. I especially enjoyed the dream Dib had...

Well. End Review. Until another chapter comes out. Then the review will start again.
Maran chapter 3 . 10/29/2002
Congratulations for writing the first fluffy story I actually liked! Actually I haven't read that many fluffy stories, I usually avoid them, but I decided to read this one because it got a lot of reviews, and because I like your other Zim fics. You portrayed the characters feelings very convincingly. In the Tak episode, it was obvious that Dib liked Tak (perhaps he still does), but I doubt that Tak liked Dib. She is way older than him, for one. It's kind of a nice thought that she'd feel somewhat guilty for using Dib, though. And, like I said, your explanation of Tak's feelings was convincing enough. Overall, good job! Sweet Fun Dip that was long! My review, that is. 'K, I'll shut up now.
Invader Mel chapter 3 . 8/17/2002
I like it a lot. Please continue, I REALLY like it.
logan chapter 3 . 8/12/2002
i'm sure you've already gotten some pretty stirling reviews for this fic, gotta say it sure as hell warrents them. i just got off a zim downloading spree and finished watching the tak episode.. so me being me i went out in search of Dib/Tak fics. this is a seriously great story and i am looking very forward to the next installment. you have some serious tallent, i am looking forward to getting a taste of more of it when the fourth chapter comes out. keep up the awesome writing
Question the Majority chapter 1 . 6/4/2002
EEEP! I mean I thought DIB thought that! I didn't think Tak looked good, I mean... She's a cartoon alien and I'm human! Plus I've already got a wonderful, perfect girlfriend, and no matter how infinitely deep Tak's glorious inky-purple eyes were or her dark green skin- *blink* AAAAAAAAGH! YOU DIDN'T HEAR ANYTHING! *erases everyone's memory with a MIB neurolizer, then vanishes in a puff of smoke*
Question the Majority chapter 2 . 6/4/2002
Hey, I gotta' tell you that you've done a great job with this story too! I personally am not a big Dib & Tak fan as I don't see it being highly likely. Dib very obviously likes Tak, but I can't see Tak liking Dib since she's obviously MUCH older than he is and stuff... BUT, you did a really good job with it and your explanation for why Tak liked Dib was great! I mean it makes a lot of sense for her to like him when he's the only person who doesn't doubt her intelligence and stuff and so on... *being distracted by his mother, who's convinced he's still 2 years old* where was I? Oh yeah. Good job. Beautifully in character!

PS. I found it interesting what you wrote about Dib's opinion of Tak's real form. I thought the same thing. heh...
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