| Reviews for Just Be Friends |
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Guest chapter 1 . 2/2/2013 I think it was a good read, it could have had a better ending, Sora did what any normal college kid did, just finish the story with Sora and Riku reuniting when Sora is older and more mature after their summer romance and realize they loved one another the entire time... Don't know, maybe that would be too cliche, or you could end it with Sora hooking up with Kairi. This ending just sounded rushed, overall though it was good and like I said it sounds right for college life, you go from relationship to relationship. Good luck! |
Amiinyan chapter 1 . 1/17/2013 hmmmmmm... Life has a tendency to suck like that... Honestly, I think that it's good to have more stories written like this, ignoring all the stupid 'happily ever after' crap and getting to the details of what life can really be like when relationships crash and burn. I'm currently on the 'comfort Sora and tell him he did nothing wrong' boat. |
puruku chapter 1 . 10/20/2012 Wow! I was waiting for the happy ending, or the point where everything starts to turn around for Sora and he finds someone that love him just as much, and when I realized that it wasn't happening it sorta made me like this story even more. Life isn't easy and sometimes one has to suffer before one can be truly happy. And just so you know, someone who can write something that can make people feel so much emotion in such a short period of time, is not a bad person. :) So keep writing because you are amazing! |
vampireXgirl13X chapter 1 . 7/28/2012 I can kind of relate to you, hon. I just recently was pretty much used as a "mistress" by the guy I thought I was in love with, who was also my best friend, and the sad part was that I thought he was beginning to care for me a little. Then he told me that we can't be friends for a while. I share in your sadness, my dear. You aren't alone. /_ |
3ntitylvr chapter 1 . 5/27/2012 this was really good and really touching. and to tell the truth this is kind of how i'm starting to feel right now since my girlfriend dumped me for some other person she fell in love with. great story and hope stuff works out. |
Wondering Traveler chapter 1 . 3/5/2012 First of all, OH. MY. CHOCOBO. That was just awesome. O.O At I'm one step away from jumping around my house and typing like a crazed fangirl in this review. Thank you for sharing. :D T.T I feel so bad for Sora. Really. I mean, what kind of evil man would abandon sweet, adorable, and oh so cute SORA? WHY? xD He's just soooo meannnn! *pouts* I loved the way you portrayed it, and almost made it feel real. My favorite was Cloud because someway or another, I kind a feel like him. Hahaha. Liking your best friend for several years and ending up as the third wheel between him and his girl friend. haha. 'Nuff of that. :T Moving on. I really love your fic. I feel bad for Sora, but at the same time I feel sort off disappointed for him, for well... ...Acting like he is. Though I still love and understand him. - Hehe. As for Riku, I like him, but I didn't get enough of him in this fic... So yeah. I was hoping that you could maybe, just maybe (with a hot cute uke on top) that you'll right a sequel? Pretty, pretty pweeeaasse? / Okay, I know that this one is written as a oneshot and you may not have any plans for writing a sequel. But... *sniffs* I really, REALLY want one. *pouts* I want to know about poor Sora, and how is he going to deal with it. Or how will his relationship with Riku progress. And will he be able to apologize to Cloud? And will Leon finally return Cloud's one sided feelings? lol, so many questions... Sorry. ; Hope that I didn't annoy you with this review. Ta-ta~ *wink, wink, wink* |
mochiusagi chapter 1 . 2/19/2012 Poor sora, he shouldn't deal with his pain the way he is, but sometimes, even if for just a bit, letting go of the pain is the best thing to do. I would love to see more of this, quite alot of potential. |
Digimagic chapter 1 . 2/5/2012 This story was different then I expected but I liked it. Putting you emotions down like this can really help. I don't think you're a bad person. I'd love to see this continued. Really nice job~. |
dragonmaster567 chapter 1 . 1/16/2012 I can perfectly understand. I like putting my emotions down on paper too. My life just went down a similar road, and it's just as ugly. Great writing! It's not easy to find a good writer here on the site. |
Kuro Mitsu chapter 1 . 1/15/2012 I liked it. This is more real than most stories I've read on here, which is actually what I prefer now. Very angsty (which I really like), felt bad for Sora over his break-up - and I'm dying to know who his ex is! - and was happy when he and Riku hooked up. And poor Cloud, crushing on a seemingly oblivious Leon. And no, I wouldn't say you're a bad person. Can't help the way you feel about things, you just deal with them the best way you can. Your grammar is excellent, so hard to find fics now with decent grammar. Storyline is great, very realistic without getting corny or cliche or going over the top; kinda liked how it wasn't the stereotypical happy ending but instead leaves you guessing (though I'd love to see this continued). Overall a very good and enjoyable story._ |
Revolutionary Venom chapter 1 . 1/15/2012 Going from the summary of the story then reading it, this was definitely not what I was expecting. But that's a good thing :)I really hope there's a sequel to this story one day. And no, you're not a bad person. Shit happens, we deal with it one way or another |