Reviews for Fairytale
Avid Vampire Hunter chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
I really really enjoyed this. A beyond fantastic job to you. I like the concept of Ulqui and Ruki being friends, and Hime's badassery was a welcome surprise. :) kudos. *favorites story*
Mauia88 chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
This was well written! I only wish you made it an entire completed multi-chapter fic but I'll settle for this and my imagination I suppose instead. :] Love it!
HopeTheHopeless chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
I really like this fanfic! And I love Rusky's art too! I hope you continue this ()
Chappy loves Strawberry chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
compared to the other fanfictions that follow Rusky-senpais story, this has probably got to be the best one. This story deserves more recognition and I'm actually hoping that you will create more chapters for this. Good job! :)
ulquihime7980 chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
keep writing. i want to read orihime's answer to ulquiorra's question.
Aren chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
Great story, you kept the characters in-character and made it interesting. I'd love it if it was more than one chapter, though, as it was a tad shorter than I would have liked.
aryaputra chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
Really good story! Love your writing style!

Btw, have you read Chapter 6 of 'Undisclosed Desires' by Elcyion Pyte? Its ULQUIHIME and if you read it, you'll notice that it seems linked to your story somehow!

It doesn't have the same kingdom names but it's almost a continuation of this fanfic. It's ALSO based on the fanart 'Royalty' by Rusky Boz. PLEASE READ IT! I think you'll really like it! I love how you gave the story of how they met and how Elcyion somehow(telepathically?) continues it!

Enjoy reading it!

-ArYa-
luluccy chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
i'm hooked to this :D write more more more...and thank you for writing a story to rusky's picture. I was seriously hoping someone out there would write one xDDD keep writing and update soon 3
HeroofTwilight'sgf chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
Awwww :) so cute

-HeroofTwilightsgf
varee chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
I wondered how long it'd take a story based on THAT picture to appear. I must say I have mixed feelings about the script you presented: though I know what it is all about I'm not that sure either a person who did not read rusky-boz's explanation can follow.. or if the first chapter isn't too revealing.

I'd say your idea of expanding that project is cool, though. a really trustworthy opinion may be written after a few chapters, so do continue.
nice0girl chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
please continue, it's really well written, has ulquihime & ichiruki and i would reeeeeeeeeeeeeally like how the story unfolds :)
luna chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
this is amazing! i hope you update soon!

i like reading fairy tale fics about ulquihime
nypsy chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
liked the ulquihime parts.
Crickeymate chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
This chapter was pretty good! I liked how you fleshed out the Bleach characters from the lovley Royalty pic that RB had shown us complete with a little backstory. It's a pity that there is only one chapter to read though. MOAR of this please, I say madame! I'm smelling a lovely fanfic coming out of this simple prolouge.
writingissues chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
Tbh, I was hoping you would continue this and such. I love your UH and it's an amazing idea and your take on Rusky's idea is very interesting one. The characterization was good imo since it's an AU liberties can be taken and such. So I really liked it and crave more.

I only have one problem.

It's one thing to have Orihime actually fight, since she will fight and I expect her to protect herself in SOME WAY. But her actually, threatening to kill someone?

I just don't see her ever saying that or actually being able to get a dagger to some brute's throat in that way. I have to be honest since you're my friend I didn't find that part right there IC at all, Ulquiorra's reaction and such afterwards WAS...but even in AU I can't really see her saying something like that or doing that.

But other than that I loved it, and hope you do more but that is your choice and for something stand alone it's very good. )
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