Nice story.

I think this really could have happened at the end of that episode. I mean, Spock's reaction at the end when Jim revealed he was still alive was very telling. All thanks to Bones. Without him, the whole story would have been different.

awe!

HUGTIME IS THE BEST TIME!

Oh... my... God... this was so beautiful! I couldn't help but smile throughout the entire thing. An amazing piece of fiction.

D'AWWWWWWW

Spock, I'll except you for your human lineage! It made me so mad when I heard he was getting married! But it was a good episode. _ What made me even angrier was episode 24, season 1 "this side of paridise" when this one lady pretty much drugs Spock into loving her and he starts to show emotions. THEY EVEN KISS! The whole time all I could think of was that it should have been Kirk he was making out with not her! Although Spock did look pretty funny laughing and hanging upside-down from a tree. _

We done I'd say. And mosty in character, so you' get extra points on that )

I like your writing style, it matches the theme and the setting.

This was lovely! I've just started exploring the TOS archive, and found this immediately-I love it, and look forward to reading more of your work! Good job, especially with keeping the two men in character!

-Tara

Aww...I love these two! Cute story..P.S. I see you!

Perfectly worded, completly in character, and in blance between emotional and realistic. Awesome work.