I love this. I love the suggestion that it was the writing that broke the realtionship. I also love that they made up.

Well done.

Very nice! Bye

Nice story - I wondered how that phone call might have gone.

YAY happy McGee family. I heard a rumor of who they're trying to get to play Admiral McGee so seeing that person putting that face to the story ... odd but made it good.

Very emotionally charged chapter. :) At first I thought Tim and his dad got along better before. But we found out differently on the show recently.

Thank you for writing this lovely and interesting fiction,

Bianca

:D This is great! I love it! Tim is very in-character, as is Gibbs. Awesome job! And congrats on your 100th story :D