Omg the final was amazing, no joke, really good work thanks for sharing:)

I know you had wrote this fanfic so many years ago... but is a need for me to say that this is one of the best fanfiction in this category and believe me I have been reading a lot of them and this is one of the greatest, even when I tried in the two languages.
Maybe you read this or maybe not, but I felt like I had to say it.
Sorry if I made a mistake, but Is hard for me to write in english ;)

AWWW i wanted t no wat his mother would say when they told her the truth, Is there a SEQUEL?!

Plz write more awesome story BTW

Awesome beginning , I have read a few tk and Kari you know what stories.

was not to bad

Great story and I really like how you gave them back stories in regards to dating!

This was awesome! It was so cute and romantic, and the ending was humorous too! Well done! I wish there was more.

Way too many indirect third person references. (i.e. the teen girl, the blonde, the brunette, etc.)

Other than that pretty good read.

well another busted moment in the sex life of beloved couple. would be better if u went into more detail of their love making, but whatever still good nonetheless.

very hot & heavy! i'm sure it will get even hotter in the next.

Wow... I...err...yea... *wipes nosebleed up*

As usual for me, I read all of these in one go, they're great :)

Not much else I can say for this type of fic, so good job!

It's good so far can't wait until the next chapter.

I like that you made Kari daring in your story so it kind of contrasts with TK's being more experienced. Update soon :)

I love this story. Can't wait to see the next chapter and keep up the good work.