Cute story! Love it! :3

Very good story so far
Hope to see more in the future
Elemento

Kinda liked it but I too was bugged by the insanity still favoriting it.

This is one of the best fan fics I have EVER! So please make more parts.

Well, I enjoyed it! I got confused on some parts...but that's just too bad! XD
The story was overall cute and rather funny. :) I can't wait to see the rewritten version! But AWWW! No Chelley?

-And to all those random icky people leaving bad reviews: You don't like the story, TOO BAD. Don't review and say how bad it is, just try and find something else! People won't stop writing or listen to you if you say something bad. Ever try being nice for a change?-
...And sorry for destroying your perfect 100 reviews...DXX

100 :D

GOD FLIPPING DAMN IT! DO YOU REALLY HAVE TO MAKE THOSE CHANGES?!

Why u no update story

Nice story this is my fav chapter so far
Invader Xen out

I'm looking forward to the newer version :).

I would enjoy it if Wheatley was put-off or a little creeped out by me. That was kind of what I was going for when I said that I would glare at him and say something out of context, not that that's all I would do.

Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

W-w-what? No Chelley?

Ooh, I'm excited for the rewrite! I wanna see what you do with it this time around.

If you want, I can run the rewrite on THW too! Not just dumb chapters — the whole thing. Just if you're interested to see what I have to say about your changes in the rewrite. :)

I gotta say, your story read as very genuine — obviously, I knew the concept was supposed to be silly, but the rest of it seemed pretty sincerely bad. So, well, great job!

No! I loved non mute Chell!

No! I loved human!Wheatley!

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