BRAVO! So impressed how you developed Cloud enough to finally pull this off! Very tastefully written where Sephiroth did not fall out of his strong character despite being unaccustomed to this activity, and I love that he was helping lead the pace later on as well!

LMAO I thoroughly enjoyed Vincent being such an annoyance to Sephiroth in this chapter! I'd love to be babysat by Vincent 333 Thanks to him we now have a more interesting snarky Sephiroth to turn up the temperature!

Heya! Was wondering if you'd perhaps post this at ao3, wanted to download it including the scene you posted to but found you haven't placed this fic there. Will it ever conclude as well?

Okay, I read this and I got caught so much into this that now I'm so hooked that I can honestly say that I will literally become very emotional if you don't write the second part... so please? Umm, I might not bbe makin' much sense, bt that's cuz I'm super tired and I read this whole thing from the very first chapter for hours! Now, I'm gonna go to sleep and reread this sometime when I wake up and than... than I'll write a properr review! Good night!

Read it liked very much even though it as Cloud the Potato as love interest, chat later I'm off to Tim Hortons lol

Is that it or is there more?

heh.. cloud does not fuck around, does he?))

Ohshit! This is automatically going to turn bad. On another note, I really like this story

Why oh why did you leave it hanging? Just because it was getting good too. Oh well, all I can do now is hope you update this story and continue on ne?

Intriguing. What is to happen now? Please update soon.

I love the love hate relationship between Seph and Vincent. When Cloud told Seph that they could do anything he wanted and Seph piped up and wanted to kill Vincent. I laughed pretty hard at that.

I recently read another submissive Seph story and I have to say that I was disappointed. Although I wouldn't mind having Seph at my beckon call, the way he was portrayed in that story was simply way too submissive. It almost scarred me for life, but I recovered...barely.

Adding a little spice and attitude and with Cloud being possessive, but not overly so, makes a good submissive Seph story in my eyes. I think that is why I am enjoying this story so much. You have a good balance between Seph and Cloud. Niether one is disgustingly over the top in their roll. I also respect the fact that Cloud isn't clawing at the chance to have sex with Seph at this point. You show a good struggle in his mind of what he wants and what he feels is right.

Looking forward to reading more.

I have to say that I am very excited to see where this story goes. I like dependant and submissive Seph. That and after every thing that Cloud has been through, I have always pictured him as dominate. There are so few good stories with this concept and I appreciate this, and look forward to reading more.

Nooooo, why did he wake up'? TT Sorry, I like to see Sephi suffering, but I have come to know thats normal with fangirls, hahahahaha. Absolutely loved this chapter!

Oh gosh, oh gosh!

Bad Cloud, bad Cloud! (giggles)