You should really update and finish this one

next chapter? I'm dying for an ending!

The story is great. Please finish it.

Keep up the updates plz! I like the new story line. Xo

OMG this chapter is so cute! It’s so genuine too, like Draco and Hermione are taking the time to get closer. Definitely one of the best Dramione fics yet!

Don't u think ur portraying hermione as a little weak? I mean she's bawled like in every chapter but I seriously doubt she'd let malfoy get to her

gahhh i need more! cant wait for update

I don't mean to leave a negative review, but I promise it's only about story consistency! In ch. 3, Hermione reflects how she lost her virginity to Ron right before he left. If made me think she was lying to Draco when she claimed to be a virgin. But now she's thinking it too, so maybe you wrote it in ch. 3 at first, but then changed your mind for the story?
I thought you would like to know for consistency sake!
Also, I'm so sad that at this point Theo is being so horrible, I have such a crush on him in general!

OK...so wtf. Where are the last few chapters?! Please don't tell me you went back and started editing the whole story and we all have to wait? Three chapters away from the end...three?! We NEED them...NEEEEEEEED. Ugh...so good. I need more now. Please.

This is my first time reading this story (have not read the original) so am up to the edited chapters. Please update e chaps! Am sooooo tempted to keep reading haha :)

Argh... I really don't like Ginny...

Whoa, cliffhanger! I totally just binge-read this whole story in just a few days, and even though I just finished I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter! Hoping to see an update soon, this is really good! :)

Wait. Wait a hot minute. That's the end?! This was so good and then I couldn't click next. Sigh!

Such an amazing story! I'm just so disappointed that I can't read the end of it, or the Epilogue... Thanks so much anyway for this incredible fiction!

OMFG!... What just happened there, oh my goshh, what the hell, *!?$#,. Okay that was just exagerrated a bit but, what thewas that, unexpected soo much, omg I cant get over it what the hell, *sighs really deep and exgerrated*. WOW just WOW... I am speechless right now, like really WOW. Sighhhhh, okay now I get it why it's a Love Pentagon and it consist of Hermione/Ron/Theo/Draco/Fred, just WOW, I really did not expect that to come, like really, but srsly dont be mad at me, I am not angry and I am actually amused by this, like really amused, I have seen triads and stuff like that but this, NO, I have never ever, just WOW... So don't be mad nor be worried, I'm AMUSED by it sooo is the pentagon gonna be...um... in a long term?! There's just one way to find out, well I'm gonna read it!