That was beautiful

If this is your first story, then you my friend, have a bright future ahead of you. That was beautiful. Just remember to always revise and grammar check and I can see you writing professionally. You'll Be King of the Writers!

interesting story, thanks for writingit

This is beautiful. Never though I'd see something like this; you see The Book Thief is hands down my favorite book but I never expected others to like it as much as I did. Now seeing this...I shed a few tears. Ace was a beautiful character, not the best but his flaws were realistic. I just can't believe I found something so beautiful.

That was great! I absolutely LOVED it! :D You did a great job at putting this through Death's pov. So loved it! :D it needs more reviews! XD

wahh! i cry now!

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Cool, I am personally in love with the character of Death in the Book Thief. Find it interesting how he can be brought into manga as well. Beautifully written and very well thought out.

How does this not have any reviews? Ahh yes the category, my apologies but I haven't ever read the Book Thief myself (even though it is sitting on my shelf) so I don't quite understand where the crossover is. Either way I'm going to continue to the actual review now: bloody hell that was amazing. Using Death as the point of view and making it so characteristic was fantastic! I just loved the whole concept of this story! And your way to manipulate words is just beautiful. The whole thing was so poetic and yet dreadfully blunt at the same time. The perfect combination! Thank you, thank you for writing this!