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kiki2222 chapter 14 . 3/16 I need this to have an ending this is so unfair. |
Boejangles chapter 14 . 11/1/2019 oh my goodness! This story is so good. I am completely enthralled. I was so sa when I went to hit next chapter and there wasnt one. The way your write is beautiful. The way you have written the characters and developed the plot is just amazing. I really enjoy your writing style. I really really really hope this u.s. something you are still working on. I want to read what happens next so badly. Thank you for writing this. |
Boejangles chapter 6 . 10/30/2019 I just have to say I burst out laughing when Naruto was looking at the fountain and then told himself that he wasn't "thinking straight". Not sure if you meant the double entendre, but it was hilarious. |
virtualwrite chapter 13 . 9/6/2019 Updateeee |
Rosay Khann chapter 14 . 3/20/2019 I need an update pleaseeeee I love this story |
purpledragonoffire chapter 14 . 5/3/2018 Please, please please ... update soon... |
Misha87 chapter 14 . 12/12/2017 Damn this had me cry alooot. Please do continue to write. I want to know more. Thank you for the great work. |
Arw165 chapter 2 . 11/2/2017 It's been a year already? I hope you are there somewhere. I had a chance to read old version of this fic and the rewrite is so so much better! I'm impressed. I would love to read the story to the end, but thanks for even rewriting it. |
Kitsune Megami no Unmei chapter 14 . 7/27/2017 Update soon! I want to know what will happen to Naruto! |
Mkayemolina chapter 14 . 6/15/2017 Amazing story ! Don't leave me hanging. ! |
virtualwrite chapter 14 . 5/29/2017 Update pleasee... |
DrowingHeart chapter 14 . 5/18/2017 hey im just wondering when do u plan on updating this |
Fortune's Smile chapter 14 . 5/11/2017 The intrigue is never-ending! Oh my goodness, I'm completely hooked on this story – it's very well written and I'm giving a big thumbs up for the character development! I'm praying that the protagonists get out of this mess relatively ok ( even though I know that in good stories, it's never completely alright again after situations like these... Eek.) I really like the setting where Sasuke is a yakuza. You made his background really interesting, too – I'm really glad he and Naruto got together and how protective he is of him. (Hehehe my inner Daniel is showing.) I love their relationship and how they mutually help each other. Thank you for being so awesome at writing. I'm really hoping you might update this so this cliffie is resolved, but I understand that this stuff takes time and that you're probably busy. If you have spare time, though, you have the chance to make a gaggle of readers very happy by updating. ;) But thank you already for dedicating your time to writing 14 great chapters. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work! () |
YaoiHimeSama chapter 14 . 2/15/2017 I can't believe I BARELY found this story! And I love it! My poor Naru though, I hope Sasuke will get there soon :/ Quick question though, will Sasuke also loose an arm? And thank you so much for this awesome story! I can't wait for you to update. Ganbatte Kudasai! :) Take care. |
Guest chapter 14 . 2/9/2017 Please update |