| Reviews for The Red |
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   lanalight1 chapter 14 . 1/20/2018 NO! YOU CANNOT MAKE ROBIN'S RIGHT EYE BLIND! I swear if you do I'm just gonna pretend that never happened and it's not. |
| Little Karma chapter 14 . 12/18/2012 I am starting to think that you just can't go wrong with writing Robin and pain in the same story. Now i'm off to read the sequel. also, i hope you do do something with Jason now that it's been confirmed that although he doesn't appear as a character he is part of the YJ universe. |
| babyblue3752 chapter 14 . 10/7/2012 im impressed. i read the sequel and u really NEED TO CONTINUE! |
| V chapter 2 . 6/15/2012 One) Your spelling is atrocious. Two) The grammar in this story is equally horrific. Three) Your depictions are out of character for your story. I acknowledge that you are trying to show a different perspectives on these personas, and I respect that. However, you mangle them within your own story, switching between multiple personalities with lesser fidelity to a single character than Two Face. Four) You have potential, and never let anyone tell you otherwise. Your plot could use improving, but it does have its own distinct qualities that I admire. So basically get a beta. |
| V chapter 2 . 6/15/2012 One) Your spelling is atrocious. Two) The grammar in this story is equally horrific. Three) Your depictions are out of character for your story. I acknowledge that you are trying to show a different perspectives on these personas, and I respect that. However, you mangle them within your own story, switching between multiple personalities with lesser fidelity to a single character than Two Face. Four) You have potential, and never let anyone tell you otherwise. Your plot could use improving, but it does have its own distinct qualities that I admire. So basically get a beta. |
| 60sec400 chapter 14 . 6/4/2012 Dude... you're a Christian? I wouldn't have been able to tell with all the curse words you used. You have something to think about my friend. Also, no you really can't have blood in your eye; you can be bleeding from your eye and when you're angry I believe it's possible to have a red tint when you see. Anyway, I really liked this story! It was good and the intensity was awesome! EPIC! I loved it, thanks for posting! |
| Ravenhearst chapter 14 . 6/2/2012 When's the sequel or is there already one? |
| Jedi Ani Unduli chapter 14 . 6/1/2012 Too sudden. Otherwise, good job. Ani |
| Reina Grayson chapter 14 . 5/29/2012 :( I can't believe Batman fired Dick, but I can also see why he did, I just can't beileve it. going to read the sequel. |
| mixxi chapter 14 . 5/28/2012 OMG I LOVE ROBIN WHUMPAGE .. i know im an evil fan -.- but i just cant help myself:P |
| Red Shade43 chapter 14 . 5/28/2012 BATMAN YOU JERK! PEOPLE CAN HEAL! HE CAN FIGHT WITH ONE EYE! HAVE YOU NEVER HEARD OF SLADE? (Wait, Slade has one eye, right? Yeah he does) |
| GGCharms chapter 14 . 5/28/2012 Cliffhanger! That was just awesome! You have to put up part 2 ASAP! I loved part 1! |
| An-Author-in-Dreams chapter 13 . 3/18/2012 soooooooooooooo good. |
| Jenica King chapter 13 . 3/12/2012 Ack! There's no more! please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please Write more! |
| Ggcdrnde chapter 13 . 2/23/2012 omg. Really good short but good. So sorry I couldn't review sooner. I hope Robin, wally, and roy are okay. |
