Such a wonderful story. Please write more

I really liked this chapter. So much little details colouring what we didn't see in the movie. The kissing with James is so cute. :)

The. Feels.

That whole paragraph about Elizabeth and Norrington kissing made me fall in love with this story. Head. Over. Heels.

YAAAY!

This is an excellent story thus far and I am greatly enjoying reading it! I hope everything is going well with you and your situation! I know first hand how the loops of life can take their toll and make writing difficult. Keep up the great work and don't let yourself get too bogged down!

OMG! plesee update the story! finish it! :DD

i love norribeth...and james is sooo amazing...god will just gets on my nerves. i cant wait for the next chapter...please update soon! :DDDD

Another great chapter!

"I may still have some standing in the keep (it's supposed to be King, actually, and one line of Beckett's was a bit off, but well done!)

Yay for Theodore Groves, telling Lizzie off! Great.

The kissing scene with James was sooo cute. In fact this whole chappie was cute! ADDING TO FAVSSS!

Great work, keep it coming!

~ Norrieo

It's not 'With your leave, if you still have me.' it is "EAGERLY, if you will still have me."

Other than that, good start! xD

~ Norrieo

Very excited to see where this is going!

Thanks for the preview at the end of this chapter. Can't wait for the next one.

Interesting start - looking forward to reading more!

Please continue! I loved when cutler said, "Mr. James Norrington, is he present"