A REal Shame this wasnt completed.. A good start to a story

Wish someone will continue this story

Fun story and nice to be able to envision our own ending! Thanks for sharing.

*snicker* The various reactions to the news in the Prophet should be fascinatingly entertaining. I wonder who'll react the strongest, Ron, Hermione, Draco Malfoy, or some witch who'd determined to get her hooks into Harry?

Great little story! I like the idea of them helping each other like that and falling in love in the process.

Its too bad that this is a one shot, I would have loved to see the conclusion of this story; to see everyone's reaction to the marriage, and the final confrontation with voldemort.

loved this one shot. pity it's not longer

Wow...nice story. It would be great with another chapter or something to just explain how the Weasley's and school take it.

I truly loved this story, though you did have a minor flaw. In the description of the restoring purity ritual, it states that the pair are bonded for life, but you ignore that fact when you have them perform the ritual, stating they discovered it later.

Other than that I think it is wonderful and I see no problem with you leaving the story complete at where you did. I think leaving more up to the imagination of the reader is certainly a fine way to end it. (I did so in one of mine, I mean heck who wants to keep writing a story forever) It has to end somewhere.

Steve

"I'm putting even more in you Ginny," Harry spoke softly.

[I really like this line.] :)

Apparently the ritual to remove the block on Harry's magic didn't require a virgin? I thought they would have to restore Ginny's purity first, before doing any of the rituals...

I can just imagine the uproar the headlines of the Prophet caused...and don't blame them for leaving when they did. I actually like the way you ended this, and didn't think it felt terribly unfinished. It could use some editing though, due to some spelling/grammar issues - mainly homophones and use of apostrophes (its/it's, there/their/they're, your/you're, etc.).

An excellent start and cliffhanger. Looking forward to the next update.

thanks...love it...great job...

Sounds a little fast but not in a bad way. I like that you kept them in character for the most part, other people try to go really fast with the story and they make the characters go way OOC.

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I absolutely loved this story. I love the idea of the pair increasing power and bonding together. I really wish you would continue this story. I feel you could do a lot of this, especially based on the quality of writing in this piece. I understand if you don't want to, but I really hope you add to this.

awwwwwwww! i would love if you continue it. it such a great story!