Reviews for The Bet
Booker10 chapter 1 . 6/10/2015
Lol this is excellent:)
IGottaFindYou chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
No, Maverick wanted to be inside Iceman, and not in a quickie, we're-really-drunk-you-can-put-in-me-for-once-as-long-as-I-get-to-stick-my-face-in-a-pillow-and-it's-fast way, but real, he wanted to look at Iceman's face and see him be vulnerable, to watch and hear him enjoy getting fucked.

...Aw...how romantic...:P:P:P

He had a date with Charlie later, also, and sex with Charlie was always best after some fooling around with Iceman.

...There's a definite psychological study in there somewhere...:P:P:P

If Goose had been there, he would have made a comment about how many household deaths occur in bathrooms due to that kind of stupid shit.

...hehehehehe...danger just makes it sexier:P:P:P

"Hope you like me in your ass," Maverick called after Iceman as the door closed behind him. As comebacks went, it wasn't very dignified, but hey.

...hehe...:P:P:P

"We really have to win this," he said to Goose during pre-flight.

"Okay," said Goose. "So not like the rest of the time, where we really have to lose."

...Oh, I love you, Goose...:P:P:):):)
Truewman chapter 1 . 1/27/2012
My dad was a fan of this movie and kept forcing me and my mom to watch this ever since god knows when. Out of boredom last night I finally gave in to his request of watching for the 15th time.I gotta say halfway through the movie

- I regret nothing.

Iceman's just so

And the movie just proved the alarming obsession I have with guyxguy relationships because the moment the scene where Iceman and Mav sorta just faced off, my brain was off screaming 'NOW KISSSSSSSSSSS'

My dad asked me why I kept on smirking and giggling whenever those two were shown together on the screen and though I replied I keep remembering this stupid internet joke, inside my mind it was already stating how Mav will unfortunately be more on the bottom and bed fun would be full of swears and punches first for him before Iceman finally goes submissive.

ROFLMahgadmymind x _ x ;;

Imma stop my babble now. I was happy when I saw this story was made just a few months ago~

Love the prissy bitch part
derangedfangirl chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
You have such a WONDERFUL grasp of these characters- the voices are wonderfully spot on, and *lord* is this a hot fic. The last line made me giggle like a hyena. Well done!
carlyinrome chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
I love the way you write these characters, the way they are constantly competing, yet nevertheless fond of one another. And the way you draw out the tension is delicious torture; your stories are always really hot. I really enjoyed the balance you struck here, between Ice being reluctant to give Maverick what he wants, but still wanting it, despite himself. Really well done.
fenway5846 chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Loved it! So happy that people have started posting to this again. I love top gun slash. I don't know if your taking requests but since your a great author...

I really wanted a slash between Iceman and Slider. I want it to be right after Goose dies and Iceman realizes that he has been taking Slider for granted and wants Slider to know just how special he is?

If not it's totally okay :) Once again this was a great story and definitely stayed true to the characters!
thatsakitkat chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Oh you really do spoil me with these mav/ice fics . this one was amazing, nice to see maverick doing some fucking ;)

this line:

He would probably fuck a tree, at this point.

: made me laugh out loud! hopefully not a christmas tree . haha.

but this fic was amazingly hot and good, love your writing!