Dear lord, I want to hug them all. Especially Hazel. Why are you making me feel things?!

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Great job!(:

Just a friendly reminder, authors notes are not allowed to have a whole chapter to themselves! _

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I loved this story! You writing is just so deep and I can't even process how perfect it is. Hazels the youngest and I always did think that she would feel a bit insecure about herself, and this was the perfect way to put it into words and solve that problem. I think that you should write a Percy and Leo fanfic. Leo has always kind of idolized Percy so it'd be great for him to see what an amazing and nice guy that Percy really is. Well, anyways, you are an amazing author! Keep up the great work!

omg, I loved it! You're such a good writer! 33333

I like that first chapter it was deep and heartfelt. I like that quote from Chrion "We carry the hopes of humanity into the realms of the eternal."

I love this fic! Hazel is a cutie, she's the youngest of the Seven, it was time someone did a fic this sentimental for her to express her feelings. Also, I love how Percy is so... I don't know, awesome? actually smart? It's really nice to read some of these fics that make him seem more real and grown up. You're a great author. Loved it-again.

Cute!

Perfect. I love friendship fics, and I think you got the relationships and Hazel's doubts just right.
**favourited**

And, for suggestions, what about Leo/Hazel or Leo/Piper (non-romantic, obviously)?
You were asking for ideas... it's just a thought.

Wow... that was seriously deep...

First of all, you deserve points for seamlessly incorporating one of my favorite Joseph Campbell quotes in this story. Second, it is a beautiful discussion on what makes a hero, and I could definitely see such a scene taking place in the next book - I would almost expect it. Seriously, it is all completely in character. Poor Hazel - sometimes it is easy to forget her age because her voice is so much older, but being at the center of a prophecy that could destroy the world has got to be terrifying, more so when younger and not as experienced as everyone around least she has some very good support :)

it! PLease write more!

I LIKE IT! It's really cute!

SO sweet!

I always enjoy reading Hazel and Percy together!