| Reviews for Sundown |
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   grapesiii chapter 7 . 4/7 shut up bella! |
| grapesiii chapter 5 . 4/7 why cant bella shut up for sometime and let them handle ? |
| WhiskeyStraight chapter 8 . 12/26/2019 This is a retelling of the books, which is pointless. The ridiculously long author's notes serve no purpose other than giving the illusion of long chapters. Alice is an interfering little cunt and Edward is the manipulative piece of shit he was in canon. Pity. |
| AliceCullen0629 chapter 35 . 9/6/2019 really good story i loved it |
| M.S.Carol chapter 35 . 7/13/2019 That was an epic story. Reaching over time and to a far off future. I loved it. Im just sad it’s over. |
| M.S.Carol chapter 18 . 7/12/2019 Seems a bit sudden |
| M.S.Carol chapter 16 . 7/12/2019 Just in love with this story |
| M.S.Carol chapter 8 . 7/11/2019 You tell him jasper! |
| M.S.Carol chapter 7 . 7/11/2019 Love the momentum |
| M.S.Carol chapter 6 . 7/11/2019 Yes. Good chapter |
| M.S.Carol chapter 1 . 7/11/2019 Singer vs mate |
| celajwhitney chapter 23 . 7/3/2019 it would be so much fun to ride bella's cowboy! |
| celajwhitney chapter 20 . 7/3/2019 it only took them an hour to relieve bella of her virginity? |
| momma2fan chapter 35 . 1/27/2019 Great story! This is one of the first J/B stories I've read. I'm usually all E/B, but this may turn me to another couple. Great job! |
| PaulinaNyghthart chapter 16 . 10/21/2018 suggestion; have her use a nickname different from Alice like Jas or just Jasper. |
