Great work, the dialogues between Sarek and Amanda are very unusual and well worked out! Thank you a lot for sharing & please update soon 3

Bonsoir, merci de cette jolie histoire :D Le moment/passage qui m'a paru le plus émouvant était le dialogue à la fin du chapitre 4, la réaction de Bones est parfaitement écrite. Mais ce qui m'a le plus réjoui sont bien sûr toutes les scènes de Jim et Spock 3 Continue svp!

please update!

I read this all today and I loved it. I really hope you update soon. You are a very talented writer.

- L

I am really enjoying your story thus far. I find if very intriguing that you have Jim and Bones knowing about T'Pring before everyone else. I think that helps out a bit why they were not so surprised about him have a "WIFE". I also like how you have Spock and Jim telling each other how they truly feel and now have to face the possibility that no matter how much they may wish to be together they may not ever have that chance depending on what happens with Spock's wife. I kind of think that Spock's nightmares may be a bit of a premonition of what will happen when his Pon Farr hits him. I sure hope that you will be updating this story very very soon.

In the second paragraph I would use there, as their is possessive.

When Spock says to Bones that they have not consummated the relationship, you should use our not are.

Wow! I can see Spock pacing, McCoy's anger, and Kirk's smile as I read this. Very nicely evocative, I love it and really hope you decide to continue. _

I'm really enjoying where this story is going and I can't wait for the next chapter.