Reviews for In the Cellar
Larrimeme chapter 1 . 4/1
This is so good and terrifying and it emotionally destroyed me. I’m glad I read this.
OnewAyOnly chapter 1 . 5/7/2017
This was intense! I love how you incorporated Po's past into this :)
Guest chapter 1 . 10/3/2015
gauuu esto es bastante inesperado aunque supongo que po si estuvo allí cuando anduvo tai lung o no haaa no se
Teddi 8347 chapter 1 . 1/25/2015
I like this a lot. I could easily see this as cannon. It's really enjoyable. Now, I'm going to try to write my one-shot I wanted to write for many years now. Thank-you for rekindling that flame.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/22/2014
ho que terrible y pensar que hay niños que pasan por esto años tras años
EMarie55Plus chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
Well, as Po might say, "Awesome!" And it is. I love Mr. Ping and I could picture this whole story in my mind. Nice job. :)
Senna711 chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
Loved your fic. Mr. Ping was in character and the situation he was in seemed pretty believable. According to the KFP universe, Po is about thirty, so given that the Tai Lung incident happened 20 years prior to KFP, I'm guessing that Po was there to witness it and would have been around 9 or 10 years old at the time. However, I'd like to take this as canon since I really don't think Po is thirty, he seems a bit more younger than that.
Amy Yocom chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
great, suspensful and It can totally see this happening in Canon
freakqueen chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
this is realy good. I can definetly see something like this happining. I realy like how at the end you sugested that Oogway always knew po was the dragon warrior and you wrote mr ping very well. It was very believable great work.
omega1979 chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
this has to be one of my favourite stories on this site. Mr Ping was so in character as he cared about baby boy. Also genius putting Oogway at the end. As is it was setting the scene for his destiny
The Inspired Quill chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
The description's really vivid and the characters are well-portrayed. Well done!
iamtyping98 chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
This is so good! I could practically feel the fear radiating off of Mr. Ping. Love that squeezed Oogway in at the end. Do more stuff!
rochc93 chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
Gah, I love this to pieces, too! And I think it's very believable that Po might've been there when Tai Lung trashed the Valley. And you did it so fantastically! Mr. Ping is adorable. X3

And I loved how Mr. Ping explained "good kung fu" and "bad kung fu" to Po. Sounded very much like something Mr. Ping would do.
CCGurl chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
Wow. This was unexpected, but a great oneshot nonetheless. :)
Graystripe64 chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
Oh my, this is so great! Wonderfully written and full of emotion! I loved it!
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