Thank you for this story ! ! ! !

This was an amazing story and I loved reading it...

That moment where Merlin says he is sorry he is broken because he doesn't think he can be fixed. I understand that feeling, it was really nice to able to relate to him in that way.

I love this story a lot. I was just wondering what is the age difference between Leon and Arthur?

This was good.

I always loved Leon as a character. He's downplayed so much, but then people can see bits that make them write him like this. It's wonderful. On with the story now.

this story is pretty good and I know that it will get even better as the plot line thickens, could be a little longer with the chapters but an awesome storyline

awww

I hope you dont mind critiquing as part of the reviews but something bugged me that I had to mention: Merlin has been extremely "sheltered" and didn't even know what an apple or strawberry was, but he is able to use big words like condescending and supercilious when he was telling off Arthur?. I doubt Valiant had a dictionary handy wherever he was keeping Merlin *shrug*

this was a very tear jerking chapter. i cried a bit haha, but it was very good. on to the next!

This was the greatest story I have ever read. It was amazing how well written this was. So well written that this was the only story in my life to bring tears to my eyes.

Sequel please, your story was wonderful

Good story

I think you should with the first idea. This story was really amazing and there were times i just wanted to reach for tissues because it was so sad and heartbreaking.

Personally I like option 1 better, it promises to be more likable and with less chance of sorrow on us readers' parts (by the sound of the 2nd one it seems like Merlin will get raped again and I know I'm not the only one thinking it might be Arthur who does the raping, though I could be wrong). But if you are truly torn between the two, write them both :)

Azlyn