Oh my god so good and really shows how ruthless but vulnerable they are

I loved it. I know it's almost cliche to tell you that, but you capture the characters' emotions and personalities perfectly. And you also did a great job with Clove's backstory, I really liked it. Keep up the good work!

Love it! I seriously just love that last line! :D

Wow! This is fantastic. I love the way you wrote it. The voice in her head was a nice touch. The last line was great. Epic story. )

Wow. That was a very interesting read. I'm glad I'm not the only one who sensed a little something between these two. Writing for secondary characters is always fun, isn't it? You can do so much with them.

Now that I know that Isabelle Fuhrman is playing Clove I was literally picturing Esther from "Orphan" as I read this, lol. Nice job! :D

Oooo, I like this! It's very good!

Incredibly powerful.

The last line was total killer. I actually had to read it twice to fully realize there was an "after" instead of "before". Scarily great work :)

This is beautiful. Perfectly descriptive, perfectly written, with just the right amount of darkness. I love it so much(: