Haha, I loved it

A truly PRICELESS "Jim Shannon reaction" and I could actually see it in front of me!
And Jim WILL be spending some quality time in the "doghouse" for this stunt he he!
Wonderfull as allways I loved it !

lol! so great! loved this story so much!

Hahaha this one cracked me up.

I can picture Jim chasing Mark around the colony firing shots at him.

Terrific work on this story!

This was hilarious! I love it... Bravo.

BRILLIANT!

I loved it :D

xx

A gret story, gave me a good laugh.

Thank you.

I think Maddy's a little too blunt here but that's part of why I love it so much! You've got a winning comedic formula here: overprotective dad attempting to kill his future son in law. Seriously stop doing this to ne: I might have to favorite every one of your stories :P

Awesome, just brilliant!

Loved reading every word of it. :D

Congrats and kudos!

this was brilliant, I loved it, it was so funny

I think u shuld do a sequel of the events tht just happened. Or a prequel of just how they celebrated ;) thi was awesome btw :)

I laughed out loud with this one!

I remember that scene in Armageddon, it was hilarious. Every father and/or oldest brother's trigger point :)

This is the best terra nova story! Sequel please

That was great. Maddy's better than Liv Tyler any day (unless she's Arwen who I actually liked).

The final bit about Lis making him sleep on the couch was funny. And poor Mark still scared after all these years.

Now the image of him running in nothing but boxers might keep me awake for a while! ;-D

RF

I loved it... SEQUEL PLEASE!