OHHHHHHH

Love it! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

I read the fiction that you based this off of a few days ago, and I must say, I'm LOVING what your writing! Although, when I read a few of the things you mention in this fic that I have to keep the other persons fic in mind as well. If I were to read this entirely dependent, I would be partially lost. When you mention Prowl's ownership of the Seeker before, but so far no actual reference in your own fic, it makes it a bit... confusing.

And I do understand that this is your own AU against the others fiction, but as you keep referencing it its hard not to go, "okay so what happened to TC's and Skywarps sparklings from the epilogue" in the other fiction. _x

I do love the fact that you have added Skyfire in _ *squeals* I like how you made him a seeker and THEN a shuttle.

I can't WAIT to read more of this!

o.O Did Sideswipe...s-skip!? OMP, THE WORLD IS ENDING, EVERYONE RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!? -All the bots and cons ran for it-

Kristen seeker lover
I really love this story and want it to continue. Please do so. It is one of the best stories I have ever read about seekers and starscream. You really should have other trines come into the story and have them get a huge hanger or island which they make their home and more and more trines go to the autobots. Starscream and his trine would be the leaders and maybe they would have to fight for it but they would lead with starscream the winglord or something. That would be awesome. Please consider this!

The sentence part: "Most mechs by this time accepted their sentience and status among the Autobot army, but the majority still held them in contempt" is controversial. "Most" and "the majority" mean the same thing; therefore, "most mechs" cannot have accepted the seekers if "the majority" continues to hold the seekers in contempt. It's impossible. Your saying 75% have accepted them, and 75% haven't, that's equal to 150%/100%, inplausible.

In this case I'm being repetitive in order to make my point clear, I hope (if you got my idea immeadiately) that it wasn't too cumbersome.

And now I continue on- it's been quite some time since I've read this, so I hope I'm able to follow successfully.

-Kangarooney-

Honestly though, this is a very well-written story, the only reason I noticed that point is because this is so well-written, I've been looking harder for anything- I just enjoy being a critical reviewer when I get the chance. I mean... reading well-written stories is nice, but being able to help someone further perfect their skills is amazing. 'Cause I don't seem to have the ability to

*Giggles* Very funny.

Eeek! more of these cuties! Interesting... I wonder how Skyfire will fit into the ark with Skywarp biting at his heels? And Sideswipe got some seeker lovin' huh? B). Good job, please update soon!

Well, Sideswipe got what he wanted, didn't he?

Brilliant chapter!

Oh, just imagining Optimus trying to speak with the seekers about sparking is hilarious!

Then Sideswipe - brilliantly devious that he is - finally got the seeker he wanted.

Love Skyfire & Starscream flirting throughout their language lessons and then the outrage of being interrupted just when it was getting good.

Great to see an update & looking forward to more!

You know, I was just thinking about this fic the other day. I'm glad to see Sideswipe finally got some, although with how subtle both parties, it really was only a matter of time.

Hmm. Does the ability to break atmosphere negate carrying grounders? Or will this break even? And it's been a while since we've seen the poor con Seekers.

I almost cracked up at the very last bit, the only thing stopping me is the fact that some of my housemates are still asleep. Guess Sideswipe got what he wanted, and it seems he enjoyed himself very much. :D

And yeah, considering his own embarrassing discussion with Starscream concerning interfacing, Prowl would want to see Optimus go through it himself over doing it again. I suspect Jazz wouild very much like to be a fly on the wall for that conversation too, considering how amused he was before. Optimus may want Prowl to do it, but as he noticed, Prowl has learned very well how the hierarchy works, and he will be very glad to NOT speak of it again. :D

Optimus' reasoning regarding no sparklings at the moment is understandable. I just wonder if the Seekers will accept that for the time being. I did like that he realized that even politeness is not enough when it comes to Seekers and that there is still much he has to learn about how their culture works.

Liked the flirting, by the way. Yes, something very important was interrupted. :D

This is a beautiful AU that makes people love these adorable seekers, and even touches on the subject of animal abuse. The beautiful voice concept you added to Skywarp was a cute surprise, and I'm hoping you haven't abandoned this! I'm eager to find out if the Decepticon trine joins them!

I mean to write "Kristen seeker lover" above for my name but it does not fit. I really enjoy this story and would like to see it continue. I love fanfics that have starscream and seekers in it and this is one of my favorites. Please continue it. I don't want it to end or be forgotten like other stories that some people write and I never get to know what happens next. Than you for this awesomness!

This is such an interesting concept, I can't wait to see how it continues. Hope you update soon! Good work