Omg, I love this.

T-T this piece makes me feel sad for Naraku. Maybe he isn't so evil after all.

omg... that is epic. you are an amazing writer!

Aww...I love this so much... :D

Whoa.. I hate Naraku but I just love the way you write so I read it anyways and I wasn't disappointed! Loved this and can't wait to read more stories O

Hmm. Like the story. Just one thing.

I think you should have rated it. K

not bugging or anything.

Just saying

other than that. Loved it

nice but kind of sad really. she thinks Naraku is Inuyasha and the only way he can keep her is to keep her asleep and dreaming. His love real is poison. faveing this

...nyea?

so great keep up the good work :D yes first reviewer