I've been thinking this since chapter 1, Draco Malfoy's character in this fic is totally irredeemable, his misfortunes are completely of his own making and he can't even learn from his own mistakes. he is a complete pig

I don’t really get the plot of your story. It seems going around in circles. I have hoped by now there should be significant character developments but all characters are stagnant.

It’s episode 9 and Hermione is still an insecure doormat while Draco is still a fucking whore. So there.

What a great story..I love Draco character in this fic.. perfection

NOW I SEE WHERE THIS IS GOINGG I LOVE ITT

That was a fabulous chapter! I liked how you kept a rhythm throughout with the rejections, and the end was just adorable. also kudos on keeping draco in character so far; his agony at what he's become is hilarious.

I really like te start of this. pratty draco can be such a brilliant thing and bossy Hermione is my favourite.

I really loved your story in the beginning and middle. But it was at the point when Hermione sent Draco that "matter enough" letter that I was kinda out. And after reading the ending it feels like I read all of that for nothing? Don't get me wrong I enjoyed how Hermione and Draco started to see each other as people and actually like each other. I just feel like Hermione wasn't brave or Gryffindor enough, she should have opened that damned door and actually confronted the problem, showed some care/concern to this very sick man. And Draco, while I like him much better than Hermione in this fic, wasn't Slytherin enough, he was kinda pathetic. I get that he going though character growth and everything, but it was his life on the line, to Slytherins self preservation is important. That's another thing, how come no one in this story took that more seriously, Draco's death. You have Blaise being this wonderful friend whose always there for Draco, but all he seems to care about is work, not that his friend is dying. Like what kind of good friend does that? Instead of helping with the company, he could have actually cared more for his possible death. There was a lot of needless meandering about, when all Draco and Hermione had to do was confront each, talk to each other, be more assertive. This was truly exhausting to read, and the ending did not make it worth it. But you are talented writer, and I will check out your other fics.

This is a disaster. you want angst? fine. kindly refer to be Chan's Isolation .that is what you call angsty fanfic. This on the other hand is immature and drama for the sake of drama.

chapter 11 and Blaise is leaving and honesty at this point I'm rooting for Blaise and Draco's relationship more that Hermione and Draco.

Can't believe you managed a happy ending, sort of, and though I really do usually favor happy one, I can't shake the weird feeling that they wouldn't last.
This story was wonderful, but somehow frustrating and exhausting. Anyway thank you for sharing this unique one.

Somehow I didn't feel sorry for Hermione, no matter how it was she turned down Draco. Even after he gave up so much, she still couldn't understood him and failed him.
In your story they both too selfish to actually care each other, leading to a bad ending, though I haven't finish but I guess so. But the story still is brilliant, just your Hermione and Draco were too broken to maintain a healthy relationship.
Thank you for sharing！

I felt dirty after reading that sex scene... he is such an ass! Literally a garbage person... you did a good job woth the characterization... now am just ready to see him develop into a bearable person.

Sorry for the last comment. Typo. Haha. Anyway, just wanted to tell you this is getting cuter and cuter, honestly. At first it started pretty horrible, with everything going wrong. But then... Is Hermione giving Draco a chance? Good work there

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