I read this on AO3...
IT'S MY FAVE STORY, IMAGINE HOW HAPPY I WAS WHEN I SAW IT ON HERE!
Great story. It actually has a plot, other than pure smut.

For some reason, this reminds me of supernatural... "Yesterday was Tuesday,but today is Tuesday too!"

i was like KAWAII DESU! at the end cause it is!

This is the best Japan/Canada story I've ever read. And, no, I'm not joking.
-RMS

Ah, it's so nice to see a good CanPan fanfiction3 This was executed quite well, and my friend and I can't stop squealing about it! .

I just have to say, I loved this story

I read it a while ago actually, and it was one of the stories that actually got me interested in fanfiction. There was a plot that didn't stray from its purpose, and Matthew and Kiku were displayed perfectly (as well as Alfred, who I totally believe would ditch his lover for McDonalds...). I could really feel the emotions Matthew was experiencing throughout the entire story, and you didn't use the word "said" over and over again! (That's my pet peeve. That, and not having a new paragraph every time someone speaks)

There would only be ONE thing I can think of that would make this story, quite possibly, the best fanfiction I've ever read: more description. One example was where Kiku and Matthew go to that bakery, and you didn't even say what they ate. Now, I know it's not that important to the story, per say, but the description can make a reader EXPERIENCE the story, not just watch it happen. Think of those commercials that pour chocolate in slow motion, or glaze smooth caramel into a pot. You feel hungry when you watch those, right? I think good writing is similar in manipulating the reader's emotions and cravings.

But, really, that was it. I loved this story. It was short, sweet, and to the point (a trait I could never posses). And a happy ending! I say: keep writing, FMB! Keep writing!

Write seaceal pleace.

SO. TOTALLY. ASTOUNDING. this is what made me love these two so much thankyou for writing! this is so amazing!

*stares at Alfred darkly* ALFRED YOU DOUCEBAG, HOW CAN YOU DO THAT POOR KIKU-
*anger moment over*
i love reading this

kawaii! i loved it! alot of fluff and sex. :D

I found this during detention the other day, and my teacher yelled at me for using my phone, in attempt to make sure she didn't see what I was reading I threw my phone out a window.

Found it a day later.

Re-read this story. 3

I LOVE Japanada, and am honestly astounded how it's actually started to gain a little more popularity...

In August 2010 there was ONE fic of them! Only one!

Two adorable ukes are hard to get in bed together, I love how you did it, though!

I was presently surprised at the subtle sluttiness of Japan (No offense, it was AWESOME!)

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alfred you are a disgrace to the world. you left kiku for mcdonalds? you selfish greedy asshole. good for you matthew, you know how its supposed to be

I really loved this fic! You portrayed the charachters perfectly, and built it up beautifully

I don't know how this doesn't have more reviews. But I would just like to say that I FRIGGIN LOVED THIS STORY. I loved how you portrayed Canada, and how Japan was so cute :P And Alfred even seemed in character even though he was the jerk lmao. So yeah. I don't review that much but when I saw this one I knew I had to xD SO HEED MY INSPIRATIONOUS WORDS AND CONTINUE TO WRITE, YOU ARE A TALENT.

That is all.

Belle

Oh my god! Please write more! I looooveeed this! Japanada is so rare and this is so awesome! Please write more! Sir, Please! TT But seriously, it was AMAZING, I see little to no errors, and I really, really like this, it's so...Kyaa~! U absolute favorite fanfiction of all time, OF ALL TIME! Please please please please please please please! I beg of you! Will a formal request work?

If it will, *ahem*...

I, , here by emplore, requisition, desire a written work of fan-made fiction from you, FMB; fellow writer and lover of the smash-shit series Hetalia written by Hidekaz Himaruya, with the pairing of Matthew 'Canada' Williams and Honda 'Japan' Kiku. The basis of this 'fanfiction', yet to be offical pending FMB's approval, is of yet to be disscused and agreed upon. In exchange for one work of literature I am willing to also exchange one of my attempts at writing, an 'exchange' if you will.

Will that work? Seriously, I don't think I get any more formal then that! T_T My brain hurts...

I"m sorry if this is all annoying you but It's almost two-thirty here in Matthew and I'm really hyper from reading your super-special awesome-sause fanfiction of awesomeness so awesome that Prussia screamed and died from awesome-overload but came back to life due to it's awesome having sunk into his grave and gave him back his soul, though he still wasn't as awesome as your fanfiction that was so awesome Germany cried at it's awesomeness and Turky and Greece cried together in some dark corner to sheild themselfs from the awesome golden glow of pure awesomeness.

Awesome.

I wanted to see how many times I could say awesome without a period. Ten, apparently. :)