What
WHAT
WHAAAT?
WHAT THE ACTUAL.
You are a cruel, cruel person. I don't like you.

Hi, an unusual thing happened, you brought out my tears where usually I manage to stoically go read the next story about Gibbs. Very well done!

Aw that's such a sweet wee one-shot. Seriously though, they couldn't have got back together? LOL I loved it though xxx

I think that this is proabably my favorite of your stories even if it is quite sad. Very well written though, great emotions. This was a great addition to the ending of that episode. I was partial to a little further exploration of that conversation too :)

OMG! That makes me want to cry. Very well written, and I loved the plot to this. I've always wondered if Gibbs had told her the truth about Shannon and Kelly, would it have made a difference to Jenny. Would she have let herself love him the way she did and would she have left him. Great job on this. Still makes me want to cry, but I think it's a fantastic little one-shot.

*amanda*

Love the mind games they play with each other in the beginning. That was so them. And the answers for why she left him in Paris - WOW! I realize after reading this I've never contemplated why she left. I love how you worked it all out in this story! It's brilliant and makes perfect sense. This scene totally should've made it onto that episode. It's beautiful... even if it is sad D

This is literally the most perfect thing I have ever read and I really don't think there's anything else I can say about it.

Honestly.

Ummmm...not yo fault on this one but. Make them get back together is a plot line I much rather like to read. Its was good don't get me wrong. But I kept waiting for it to happen.

Sorry this took so long. :/

Great angst. Naturally I prefer happy endings, but this was very realistic and in-character. That conversation really needed to be expanded upon. (I've actually been working on-and-off for a couple weeks on a story based on that scene too, but don't worry, it's different. :) ) I like Jenny's thoughts at the beginning. "Did she really owe him anything?" So many people, even Jenny fans, seem to think she did for some reason. It's nice to see her with some self-esteem, since that was so quickly eroded on the show. Nice job. :)

Well done. But I like the one where they met on vacation better. Better ending! LOL di

Wow. This was beautiful, really raw and emotional. I really enjoyed it. Thank you. MOre soon I hope? :)

xx

how can I put to words what I felt while reading this story? I probably can't... it's too good... really...

This was kinnd of bttersweet but I loved it

great story! I wish they would have gotten together :)

Looking forward to an update for "A Life Reclaimed".

Wow, that was so sad yet beautifully written. Great imagery and such a wonderful way to convey their emotions. I was hoping for a happy ending, but this is so fitting for how things were with them. Keep up the amazing job. I can't wait to see more one shots in the future. ;)

I love your writing and I am the biggest slacker in the world for not reading/reviewing your other story. My life has been so crazy lately and the dust seems like it could settle, but now with the holidays in full force and me working in retail, things will never slow down for me. Sorry for being MIA. I need to work on this, but I need to figure out where I left off last. :(