This was beautiful. I think it really captured the utter sadness of their situation. It made me cry.

WHOA. That was amazing. Heartbreaking and .. just wow. You can't sew time, but YOU, my friend, can so an amazing story.

Absolutely heartbreaking. Such a sad story, but I'm glad you wrote it. I really don't think the show focused enough on the sadness that followed Amy and Rory's loss. This made me cry!

When my cousin Preston died, I watched his mother, my aunt, fall apart. He was her only child and she became obsessed with painting a portrait of his face.

This story reminded me so much of that first year without him.

Anyway, the point is that this made me cry. Which is a big deal, because the last thing I cried over was The Iron Giant, so thank you for this wonderful and depressing story :)

This is so bittersweet.

wow i wish they'd put more of this into the show. i get so irritated that they don't even seem to care that their daughters being raised to be a psychopath.

If you write any more of these, I really am going to weep. I get the tragedy of Amy and Rory and Melody much deeper than the Doctor and River, because they never will get their baby back. I do hope they'll try again... and maybe Amy will stop knitting and will have someone to hold.

Wow, yes, this is a huge perspective the series seemed to have completely ignored - Your writing's brilliant too, of course, and captures the utter hopelessness and despair of the situation.

Holy cow,this is heartbreakingly beautiful.