I love this story so much but I’m kinda disappointed that Anakin would leave his kids with the Jedi. I would think that Anakin wouldn’t want his children to be raised as Jedi and would have sent them to Padmé family. Can’t wait for more

Why would Anakin give Luke and Leia to the Jedi and not Padmé's family. That's where they belong. With family.

I love this story, your writing is amazing!

I must admit I believed it was abandoned and was really surprised when I saw it updated.

I hope your muse stays with you and there will be even more chapters soon. The story is keeping me in suspense. I keep on wondering what will happen next. I especially love how you portrayed Obi-Wan and Anakin, I can't wait for more interaction between them.

Once again, I love your story, please continue writing, you are amazing

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I don't know what to make of it. I honestly don't. But first things first. For one, this fic is written so incredibly easily to read, it's like butter! I think everyone should take a leaf out of your book on this matter. It's really easy to grasp what the fic is about. And yet-

*sigh* Yes, but there's always this 'and yet'. This fic, for being so easy written, so plain, is full of hidden meanings, things that are hiding in plain sight etc.. It makes the fic more... more mysterious, in a way. More addicting.

But one thing doesn't give me a rest - why do every author seem to insist on sending Anakin back to Tatooine? You've heard in in the movies - he *hates* it, abhorres it, it disgusts him. Why, pray tell, would he be willing to return there? If he would think of it as a punishment of sorts, for his crimes, the punishment would be too mild, too calm. But if he'd simply like to hide somewhere, then there are thousands, if not *millions* of planets and systems. Why Tatooine?

So you see why I'm conflicted. But, overall, I enjoy the story immensely. Keep writing!

Feeding the authors ego: please update soon!

Please please pleaseee continue this fic, one of the best I've ever read! I just love it, please continue this one.

Really enjoy what your doing with this story, keep it up

really enjoying it! Love the way you're portraying the relationship! This situation feels a bit different from other fics as well! Well done :) Update soon!

Hi! Just wanted to leave a quick review and say I'm really enjoying your story! I love the way you've changed the way things worked out. It's so cool and unique. Keep up the great work! Can't wait until your next update. :)

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Another amazing update and it's left me thirsty for more! What's happened to Anakin?

This is really good! keep going!

Very cool premise- I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, and I love Anakin's intially apathetic respone- he really doesn't have anything to connect with, anymore.

Aww, and I like Obi-Wan getting a Yoda-esqe amusement from being strange and unpredictable.

Very much looking forward to the next chapter.

Very very very GOOD

I awways thought that Darth Vader is a perfect old Oder Jedi, he obey the order, mo emotion, never argue with his Master...