Love this story can't wait to read another chapter

very cute, i hope there will be more

That was GREEEAAAAATTT!

Such a cute story. :D

I like slash, but I'm so amused by the fact that fanfiction has come to the point where you feel more need to classify what non slash instead of slash.

Cute

This is beautiful. Thank you for sharing. 8)

Fuck! The endings cute. I can't seem to stop grinning. I had thought about this pairing before but I had never read one but I felt as if I had to read this one. And I'm glad I did. Though I'm confused about one thing. Aren't Ash and Gary the same age? You wrote that Gary is 21 while Ash is 19. I thought they were the same age as they began their first journey at the same time.
Well, anywho. Loved the sweet fluffiness of this story. And really well written.

Now that was the perfect level of sweetness for my sweet tooth. That was so cute. Especially when Gary got jealous and was staring at a shirtless Ash. XD

Awesome story! I enjoyed reading it. Continue with the great work!

You should continue this but I'm not forcing you :) But you really do write so well! I like it!

Aw, this is cute :) I love it, great job!

All I got to for this story is and I have been MIND BLOW by the sweet fluffyness of it.

*mutters* ouch! stupid sweet thooth

This entire story is making me d'aww-ing and squealing like crazy lol. You wrote them so nicely, and so cute!

This was so sweet and so well written. Fantastic job!