I've been wondering. This story is good, but you keep calling him a brunette when he has black hair. And you transition between calling him a brunette and a raven(which I know means his hair color).

Another thing, not to be... well, a know it all or whatever it is people call us, but it's not 'brut', I think the word you're going for is brute. Honestly I've seen people spell other words much worse, but I can't help pointing it out anyway.

i know it was OOC but well i enjoy it, such a sweety sweet story full of fluff

awesome story
love it :)

Couldn't finish reading this. Characters are way too OOC for me.

That is single handedly the fastest sea turtle hatching ever.

o MY GOD. you Made My day author-san...good job! I love this story, I love the izaya and I love the shizu-shizu...

*Smiles as blood pools out of my eyes and nose* Author - Chan, I LOVE THIS STORY...Please make a sequel.

OMG izaya is ooc I love you thank you for that.

Izaya having a nosebleed ... This is heaven.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA IM DYING WITH LAUGHTER! OHHHHHHHH GOD! THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO FUNNY!

They're gonna kiss, they're gonna fuck,

Shizuo is gonna fuck Izaya's butt, yeah!

Holy crap, you did a good job mapping out that cruise! Also, I read your works on and I love them so much. You do such an amazing job portraying the characters, and you inspired me to write more of them as well. Keep writing, author-san!

I love how Izaya acts like a little kid!
I love the whole story too.
This is the third time I've read it!

it's great

love the story. Best ever !