Oh my god I'm crying help

Dialogue seems kinda weird at times, but otherwise, pretty nice story, and pretty darn creative.

Also, for the title, is it referencing Of Mice and Men? Cuz I don't see how this story is anywhere similar to OMaM...

Rereading this again was an absolute pleasure!

I was smiling like a doofus all throughout each chapter, laughing till my sides hurt. And It's not easy to make me laugh, especially in writing. You've accomplished this with flying colors. And I praise you for that.
Keep up the amazing writing! :)

This chapter always cracks me up. XD

that was a damm good story Gothic cat keep at it

Despite the dynamic you put in the original ending, I much prefer this one, especially concerning the team's reaction. Tooth necklace.

Good story, it was, on the most part, a fun and enjoyable read. The characterization was excellent. Very well done.

Interesting... Now to the final chapter...

"Sasha—Is Spy!" Like you haven't heard it in enough reviews already. Hilarious. Wait, more stuff's happening.

Have I told you that I like the characterizations? Because I do.

Soldier's always good for a laugh.

This is interesting. But after that warning, I'm not sure I want to know how it ends...

Is funny story!

That was weird... comedy where I was laughing but then creepy tragedies where I was cringing

Wooo! I pretty much cried the whole chapter when Spy was imitating Heavy. And then I died when Spy spoke in "Sasha's" voice. XD
Interesting development with the usage of the cigarettes, the BLU Spy, and the character development of Spy becoming "part of the team".

I also particularly enjoyed the interesting portayal of the Pyro, even though he/she/it didn't get lots of screen time. I felt the eerie inhumanity and creepiness of the Pyro while seeing that he/she/it isn't a total monster.