love it

I loved this enough the first time i read and yet my love for it grew! I really really really love this story

I HATE YOU! You killed one of the few girlfriends Alan will get. Joe could you do this to him.

Yay! Michael was...mentioned.

As much as it matters to kill bloodsuckers, this kind of thing doesn't come around every day. Especially for us, the two kids who own a comic shop and kill vampires.
Nope. It doesn't. Not for them anyway.

I like it.

Yeah! That means you can totally added Skyler and Leon to the next story! Let's give Edgar some love!

This chapter was amazing, you really suprised me there, didn't expect that to happen. The last chapter made me cry but this one made me happy. Once again, great! :)

I thought this chapter was BRILL! It was really upsetting at the end, but it was good :)) Can't wait to see what happens next! I hope David gets what's coming to him, lol :)

I love this story, it's very interesting. I think you should make a sequal. It's a really good story, I like the romancey theme, it's cute. :)

Hey there!

Sooo you asked me to come review this story, and since I am a fellow Frog lover I came and read it!

It's pretty good! My only thing is that I feel like Alan and Natalie are getting along a little too quickly...

But then again, writing is hard sometimes... lol every time I try and write something romance-y, I try to make it kind of slow... but it's really hard to do that, in my opinion.

But this is all just me here. Other than that, it seem pretty great!

I feel bad for Edgar... lol, that's because he's kind of my major fangirl crush... XD

~Byrneshadow

I 3 the story! I like the creepy voice part in the beginning, and the the way she is around Alan! Can't wait for the fourth chapter! Hope it's as awesome as the others! (I know it will be!)

This story idea is awesome! I really like the first chapter

Keep it up and I hope the next chapter is out soon!

This story idea is awesome! I really like the first chapter

Keep it up and I hope the next chapter is out soon!