That last line is absolutely, perfectly brilliant. The rest of the fic was very good too, of course, but that line... Damn.

I love it!

Stunning! I loved every line! Your ability to describe things and make them real in a readers mind is incredible!

Lovely

They are amazing dancers. You are an excellent writer

Well written! This story conveys a lot of emotion and I love the interaction between the Doctor and River.

That was beautiful

Oh my God. I cried so much! That was so beautiful, most beautiful fan fiction I've read in a long time. They are the biggest OTP of all time and space and you have the biggest gift ever cause your writing is flawless and beautiful. Congrats!

Although I'm pretty sure the Doctor shouldn't know they're married yet (I believe he mentioned her parents being asleep onboard the TARDIS in either First Night or Last Night), this was beautifully written. Your descriptive language made it really easy to picture.

Yep, yep , yep. Lovely, lovely, lovely. You never disappoint.

This is beautiful. What a magical place. You've capture the feeling of her youth and the newness of it all. Nice.

That story made me cry...the episode itself was sad enough...poor, poor Doctor.

I just saw First Night & Last Night. Thank you for continuing the story. I hope that you will write another adventure soon!

Beautiful as always and the characters are spot on. I like the young unsure River.

This was wonderful. One question, though. Are the NaTD scenes on the Internet yet because don't know if I'm getting the boxset and I really wanna watch it...