Make it longer please! The story is strong and the writing! Love Draco and Hermionein your fic️

What a wonderful snippet that shows us more about Draco and Hermoine's characters than the books ever did. I think you did a great job showing the conflicts within the Malfoy family. Lucuis who loves his family but does not want or care to extend it to his wife's own family is something that is interesting to explore and I think you hinted at it in a way that is easy to understand. Narcissa waited for her husband and friends to disappear first before going to warn a beloved banished sister about what is to come. And you also did a good job showing Draco's own conflicting emotions about life debts to someone he never could have dreamed of owing to. Thanks for sharing with us!

aweeeeeeee

What a sweet Draco, in his own way

Oh I very much liked the idea of him watching over her.

I really enjoyed this- and it’s what I will now imagine happened.

um more please? thank you

I love this!

I love all your dramione stories. Please write a full length one so we can all savor your talent a while longer.

Enjoyed this! Thanks!

This is good, I like it

I too am peeved that the part from GoF where Draco warns Hermione isn't in the movie. It also really confuses me why J.K.R wrote that, seeing as she tells people they shouldn't like Draco and her summary on him on Pottermore is really contradictory to his part in this book. I think she is confused. If he was so down right terrible he wouldn't have warned Harry and Ron to get Hermione out. Idk. Frustrates me.

This was great! Is it over though? Not sure if this is just a one shot or if your planning on a chapter 2? Thanks for all your hard work!

Fabulous!

Perfect