I've just started reading this fic, I totally loved Primary Mechanisms and I'm actively reading each one of your works one by one. Also I'm a Spanish speaker so there's some little details I'd be willing to talk about if you are willing. Anyway I truly love how you write, I can't get enough of it so thank you very much.

Oh my goodness! This story had me on edge! There was so much emotion in this. So much power behind Ruby. I loved every single sentence of this.

loved every bit of this story, I've been reading your primary mechanism story and I am in love with your writing style. you are able to write so elegantly it's like art! keep up the fantastic work!

I'm mad at myself. I didn't review?
First of all, this is a very lovely story. I found it a couple months ago and this should be the third or fourth time I'm reading this..
It's amazing.
That's all I can say to describe it. I find it a little unrealistic that she's not traumatized by using her body to buy the drugs, cause her father abused her... but it also makes sense. I absolutely fell in love with it the moment I began reading it after I finished Primary Mechanisms. This is a story I can continuously read.
It's also become an inspiration, and I'm ending up typing a giant oneshot lol (the plot is no where near this)
But I hope you are well and that you keep up the amazing work, I'd love to see more of these two... but it seems just right with where it is right now.

This is a great story, very well done grit and darkness without having it be over dramatic. The premis is great and you have wonderful and realistic character development. The more of the stories I read the more I like them.

*bursts into applause* bravo!

Damn...BEST. IRONHIDE. FANFIC. EVER!

A great story! I love the idea you went with! But I don't think all your Spanish is correct in usage. For example, usted is used in respect for those you may view as above you. And todos los derecho is all right, as if all of something is to the right. If I'm stepping on your toes, ¡lo siento!
~Shado

I absolutely loved this! Definitely one of my favorite OCxTransformers fanfic. It was to real and raw and diverse. I'm tired reading the same perfect character over and over. This girl is Hispanic (which is the ethnicity I probably see the least) and curses a lot (like me oops) and faces real struggles. I once read this fix about a girl who was raped that instantly fell in love with her rapist like wtf!? Some people understand sexual assault, some don't, but either way, you wrote this so beautifully.

Yay! Another happy ending! I'm glad Ironhide and Ruby faced their inner demons and problems together. Nothing can tear them apart. :)

Wow... This was... Oh god this was hard to read in some areas... I'm so glad Ironhide scared the shit out of him like that. People like that don't deserve to breathe the same clean air we do. I love a happy ending.

Oh I loved this story. I stumbled upon it to be honest. SOOO very glad that I did! Be nice if they sparklings? Maybe next story? Look forward to more of them. Excellent dude Well written

This story was so emotional for me, as I connect with Ruby on an extremely personal level. You've done an excellent job writing this story and your understanding of how hard it is to recover makes it even better.

This is amazing! Mostly when there are stories with and OC that takes drug, uses his/her body for trading, refuses to let people helm him/her, doesn't have real friends, I mostly push the back button because it is something you would expect from a huge Mary Sue. But because I'm such a big fan of your Primary Mechanisms, I didn't doubt for a second to give this story a chance, and HELL, I never regretted it. So dark, sad, en still so real and relatable. Ruby seems so broken because of what happened and it's amazing at how a big, proud, and sometimes very serious Ironhide can break through that shell of hers.

Although the Optimus/OC stories are my favorites, Ironhide in definitely a amazing guy and deserves someone that loves him for who he is. :)

Nice