Very hot. I like how the writing is simple yet effective.

However, Sweet Dreams was originally by Annie Lennox and if you're hinting that she's pregnant, I should note that it takes a month for signs of pregnancy to show.

Oh, wow, this was very hot and sexy, I loved it! Fresme will forever be so fascinating to me. There's just something so wrong and so erotic at the same time about it. Great job! ;)

~Christine~

So simply written and yet so effective! Hot smut for a beginner and I really love how in the end she didn't mind it wasn't a dream. Hmm, apparently, she might've gotten pregnant seeing that she had vomited but it didn't seem that she minded that either. Ah well, this story is getting favorited right this minute. Do continue writing.

I liked this story, it was very dark and sensual... ;)