Reviews for Not Quite Paradise
Loveratgames chapter 4 . 4/13/2013
Update please What happens next
i-am-turk-fear-me chapter 4 . 4/6/2012
Update Please please please! I Wanna know what happens next!
icelaika chapter 4 . 3/11/2012
i cant wait for the next one! please update soon :)
Maxxxer chapter 4 . 2/21/2012
wow. poor nero, wrong place wrong color. its been goodstory so far. I hope you can make an new chapter,good luck
anon chapter 4 . 1/13/2012
stumbled across this story and i'm kind of really loving it so far! 3
Ohnospaghettieos chapter 4 . 1/5/2012
... I f33ll lik3 my fri3nds would kiddnap me into a alleyway... Just with out the mouth rape lol.

Please update as soon as you lazy ass can!
surrendertome chapter 4 . 1/2/2012
Hi there,

I am really enjoying your story. Your attention to detail is really good. I didn't feel that this chapter jumped around to much. It fit within the story line you have set. I look forward to the next chapter.

Happy writing
bitbyboth chapter 4 . 12/30/2011
Poor Nero, I think I've been saying that a lot this story XD I feel so bad for him! And Dante is certainly not making things easier! For a gang, it seems to me, you have to have loyalty and I suppose family threats can do that but it seems easier just to find someone else who actually WANTS to join XD Nero's just special I guess, the rest of the gang seems like they want to be there. Update soon!

~Bitbyboth
SirenaLoreley chapter 4 . 12/30/2011
I'm glad you updated! And also glad you had a nice holiday, lol!

But, damn... poor Nero, having nightmares and whatnot; but also, he seems to start feeling something thowards the gang leader... mh, interesting...

And, was 'he' the one who trapped nero and took him away from Kyrie's boring chitchat? damn, I gotta wait now, LOL...!

Take care, good luck and HAPPY NEW YEAR!
Nefarious Seraph 13 chapter 4 . 12/29/2011
Kinda short and not much Dante, but I look forward to the next chapter. Do I sense an alley makeout scene? Good luck and Happy New Year.
Ohnospaghettieos chapter 3 . 12/25/2011
Update update update!

Please update soon!
SirenaLoreley chapter 3 . 12/16/2011
Lol, poor Nero... not only disgraced, but also forced to join the gang...! Dante seems to be a serious criminal here (or at least, has the stuff to be one, lol).

I wonder, if Nero will grow to like the guy... or will it me a hate/fear relationship...

Thanks for the update! Take care and good luck!
Nefarious Seraph 13 chapter 3 . 12/16/2011
So far so good! I'm really liking this plot. Hm, I have a feeling Dante's gonna do some crappy shit for a while now to poor Nero before he eventually fall in love with Nero and realizes it; then upbeat Dante's gonna get a bit angsty when he realizes there's no way the kid'll forgive him after the crapfest he put him through(though Nero will).
kura-wolfgoddess chapter 3 . 12/16/2011
This story seriously needs more reviews! So I decided to review :) I really like this story and I find it to be well written thus far. I'm very very interested in where you will take the plot, but so far I'm on the bandwagon! Happy Writing! (and happy Holidays if you celebrate)
TwWereWolf chapter 3 . 12/15/2011
Wild Madeline used tackle! It's super effective!3 I like this chappy.X) My favorite part was the
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