Ow, so sweet~

Amazing. The last line really hit home. Great job conveying the character's feelings. It very easy to feel all the different emotions like fear and anxiety as well as a desire to be free and fly. Thanks for writing it!

You know this is very interesting because Alfred takes the role of the tsundere basically and Arthur acts more on emotions. I like this. A

I've read it twice already, favorited it both here and on AO3, and saved it for personal offline reading. I STILL can't figure out just what I like about it that makes me love it so much, but whatever it is, job well done - it's fantastic.
~Em :)

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They are so meant for each other ahh...
Thank you for writing this :)

Awesome mermaid!America and pirate!England story! Thank you for sharing!

So cute! This is precious, and remarkably sensual for how fluffy it is. Kudos!

omg this is hella cute. so many feelings and all of them are of a fluffy, mushy, lovey-dovey nature. i adored this

That was so sweet my teeth ache! I LUV IT! XD

Most sappy line ever, but this story is pretty (I tried).

Is it weird that I started crying?

No amount of words, synonyms, idioms, and phrases could fully describe how wonderful and beautiful it was to read this piece. I adored all of it and I thank you for writing something so, haha, "pretty." c:

That was beautiful. Well done.

This is so cute! Usually not a fan of folklore or mythology in Hetalia but I just happened to click this one open and i'm glad I did xD

So sweet, I loved it.