Awwww.

rawr!

but does crowley really swear so much? O_O I HAD NO CLUE. MUST REREAD. MUUUUSSTTTT-*flops*

I like the line about "hol...devilish fuck" as it reminds me of how Crowley couldnt say godsend or blessing in the book. You really managed to capture the characters and it reads like a sequel, albeit an unorthodox one. Good story.