I'm going to die from laughing hahahaha Amazing

Funny though Chan would use a messenger hawk instead of a phone. You might have also pointed out exactly how Chan and Ruon Jian were in trouble, such as a semester in a military academy or reform school. Also, a pathetic as Chan was, what does that make the socially inept Princess who threw herself at him to kiss him. Definitely something Zuko would have needled Azula about if he'd know about their kiss.

Grammar.

If we forget the fact that in the Avatar world there're no telephones, then this exact thing could have happened in the series as well. That's an interesting story you've got there.

Good job. Some grammar mistakes that can easily be fixed. Other than that it's a very nice fic

the plot of this story is very good - I wish more people would write about this topic -

( love the humer azula stories!), however, I feel that this could be written a little better. the writing style in general is a tad bit poor. don't get me wrong, I LOVE THE STORY! you should definitly write more like this!

I lold! Make more!

Hi

Interesting little fic, involving the beach.

The quality is pretty good in some areas; good narration, depth, dialog, interaction, humor and suspense. The primarily flaw is a few spelling errors and paragraphs. Its readable, but you need to work on space.

The characters, Mai, Ty Lee, Zuko and Azula are very in character.

The basic story has a good plot twist with that stunt they pull.

The wholesome standards are high.

The language is clean.

Nothing is suggestively offensive.

No extreme violence or any other vile content.

I hope this review brightens your day. God bless.

Data Seeker

Muahahaha! Actually, when watching the episode, I was hopping Chan would report it to his father to arrest them. It would have been hilarious.

Work on separating the dialogue and a touch of grammar. You have a funny story!

Haha! Good Job!

I have always wondered what happened after the party. The grammar could use some improving, but well done nonetheless.

Thanks for sharing!

Spry!

Oh yes :)! I've always wanted to know what happend if Chan really got to know they really where or what would happen when they parents got home, nice combination!