Reviews for In a Tree
Guest chapter 4 . 3/19
it was really cute, i loved it
VERY DEVOTED FAN chapter 4 . 5/7/2015
I NEED MORE NOW
WarGreymon X chapter 4 . 6/25/2013
This was absolutely great? Great romance. I'd give it 9.8 out of 10 because you had some spelling errors.
Soulfire72 chapter 4 . 4/24/2013
A good chapter, I don't really have much criticism to add, apart from a spelling mistake or two. I would suggest either adding a little epilogue to this chapter or as a separate chapter, and marking the story as finished. If you have significantly more ideas later, you could always make a sequel.
Soulfire72 chapter 3 . 4/24/2013
Nice chapter, though that dream of Renamon's seemed out of nowhere, since there was no indication she had such predicating thoughts apart from the weird dreams she had about her and Guilmon fighting.
Soulfire72 chapter 2 . 4/24/2013
Good that you put transitions in this chapter. The fighting scene was alright, but a lot of the sentences seem too short, kinda interrupts the flow, but otherwise alright.
Soulfire72 chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
A nice first chapter, though the dreams were a little weird since there were no transition breaks or anything to indicate it was a dream.
the REAL big macintosh chapter 4 . 2/19/2013
i think it STILL was good, maybe 1 percent worse, than the others, but its STILL good, and i REALLY want you to continue, so PLZ DO!
the REAL big macintosh chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
pretty good, or maybe REALLY good! but the whole shooting and or killing guilmon thing at the beginning and in her dream, kinda.. whats it called... well, at least i thought it was weird and scary, because i was able to make the SCENE in my head! but since i managed to do that, then that proves that you're good at writing! im just not USED to reading stuff like that, and AT LEAST not as GOOD AS THAT! so maybe THAT'S why i got a little freaked out, idk, BUT GOOD STORY ANYWAYS! :)
a fan of tamers chapter 4 . 12/27/2012
Great story I hope you write another chapter soon
dragonsofthe8elements chapter 4 . 8/12/2011
you could write when gulimon asks renamon to marry him.
Liirum chapter 4 . 12/1/2010
I agree with most other reviewers! this was an amazing... no... it was an epic story told by an epic author! and you should seriously consider a follow up story or even another chapter! heh... i get a little pushy so ya... consider another chapter dangit! haha
VriskaFanGirl chapter 4 . 10/30/2010
RenaGuil fuck the world i love this couple just as much as i do Rukato and Renauki. Ryuki and Jurato can kiss my ass i hate Jeri and i really hate Ryo those two should really be a couple
The digital fox chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
Wow what a great story!
D chapter 4 . 2/13/2010
Wow what a great story!
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