Reviews for Brothers in Arms
Ella chapter 1 . 4/22/2019
This was a clever idea. I enjoyed it!
LavenderStorm chapter 1 . 2/3/2018
Hahaha, this is a cute and entertaining short story, although the story's tag was a dead giveaway. Still managed to keep me guessing about who's who until the two "clones" started talking to each other though:)
OwlOtaku123 chapter 1 . 11/27/2017
okay s o . i . l . ove . t h e . . e s mo . re . th an my se . l . f
Darth Becky 726 chapter 1 . 10/8/2016
That was awsome. Though, I'd like to know how Obi-Wan and Anakin managed to even get captured and what prompted them to disguise themselves as clones. And those discriptions were very misleading. Very well done. So good. Keep up the good writing. May the Force be with you!
Quacked Lurker chapter 1 . 4/7/2016
LOL!
Lovely.
Absolutely gorgeous.
Very much in character - and very well written.
Thank you.
AsianTwinkiesFTW chapter 1 . 4/6/2016
You had me fooled up until "Hothead" saw the captive natives. Those speech patterns are... well they're very telling. I obviously had to go back up and re-read it in a new light! Haha awesome fic! :')
AllHailTheGeek chapter 1 . 6/23/2015
Curveball! I suppose I should've guessed by the bickering who the two "clones" actually were, but that caught me completely by surprise! Great work (as usual)!
Brievel chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
...and here I went through the whole thing it was actually a pair of clones. I always did feel they were under-appreciated...wasn't until Master Mundi showed up that I figured out who it actually was. Brilliantly executed.
Padawan Aneiki R'hyvar chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
Big fat grin. lol :) *chuckles as the boys snark their way through this*
coruscantbookshelf chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
Did you play the guys' 'voices' weird on purpose to make them harder to recognize? I knew it was them all along, (it says so in the précis) just couldn't tell which was which.
Heather chapter 1 . 7/14/2013
Neat idea! I liked the ending too.
time2read chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
Amazing Story! haha obi wan is the one who has to break under interrogation wonder why? fan girl squeal obi wan angst! loved how they infiltrated the droids!
Crazy chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
Ha! So that's how there can be fifteen years between them. A clever ruse. Good job! You had me fooled.
GreySilhouette chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
Brilliant, and I didn't realise who the two "clones" were until the end, although re-reading it there were a few subtle hints, such as CT-969041 wishing aloud that he could jump the mud and CT-222557 severely reminding him that he couldn't, and very much in character banter, among a couple others.
One thing. When the two see the natives, there is the line, ""Hothead!" CT-969041 barked. "You aren't helping anyone with your anger."" As the first section established "Hothead" as CT-969041 and "Scruff" as CT-222557, you might want to change that.
Loved the moment where Mundi hands them the lightsabers and the reader realises just who the pair of them are, and the musings on cost cutting measures such as recycling armour what the clones think of that the most.
Grey.
Valairy Scot chapter 1 . 6/22/2012
Oh, lovely...very unique, too. Hothead and Scruff indeed.
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