I have loved ever moment reading this fantastic story. You took my two favorite DA2 characters for the love triangle and I love it so much! I'm so happy for Cullen and Marian because honestly it's the more interesting tale. But man, your Sebastian really re-lit the torch I carried for him. I always loved the idea of a post-Brother Sebastian being able to flirt and seduce with the best of them. I liked the in particular that Hawke felt she out of her depth now with him. I am definitely going to need a Sebastian story after this. XD

But you also did Cullen an amazing amount of justice! I loved the way you were able to balance his Templar tendencies with his stubbornness but also his inherently good heart. You handled his character so well and I always love a good Cullen. The story kept me intrigued through the politicking with the Mage uprising plot being an interesting twist. Overall, I'm incredibly thankful to you for writing this! It was a joy.

Ps. If you ever write a dedicated Sebastian/Hawke story consider me first in line. You wrote his character amazingly.

Thank you so much for this. I can scarcely believe that this is your first story. The quality of writing and storytelling was exceptional. Congratulations!

I've thoroughly enjoyed living in your version of this world while I've be struck down with the flu, and feel sad to have to say goodbye.

Hopefully you're still writing and bringing joy to many other readers.

Best wishes,
Kiya x

Okay, so I'm nervous now. Religious conspiracies never work out well. Crossing my fingers Hawke and Cullen can weather the storm.

Thanks for writing. :)

Thoroughly enjoying this wonderful tale! You're a skilled storyteller, and I'm completely invested in the slow burn of the Cullen/Hawke relationship. Thank you for writing and sharing. :)

Kiya x

Wow. That was awesome.
My poor heart though. Some things were just so intense!
A Really Damned AWESOME story.
And I loved it

This was lovely. Absolutely lovely. Thoroughly enjoyed every moment. Well done!

such a beautiful story thank you so much for sharing this with us.

I wish I could favourite this story more than once. Wow. I've been too caught up in the reading to leave reviews!

But seriously, this is just... perfection. In every way.

So I'm pretty sure that I ship Cullen w any of the main ladies, and a jealous Cullen is all the better. Another great piece. I enjoyed it a lot. And this was your first fic or the first da fic? Either way it was super impressive.

Plus there was the little bonus of Alistair/Cousland, which I was pleased to see incorporated. Is it odd that I ship this pairing but then ship Amell w Cullen and no one else? When the characters are kind of interchangeable?

Either way, another great job!

Well done! Very enjoyable read!

I didn't sleep a wink and was up until past 6:30am reading this.

It gave me warm and fuzzies and kept me on the edge of my seat, even with my Internet dying mysteriously throughout the evening.
Simply Amazing.

I have an undeniable soft spot for Cullen and this has just made staying up 7 hours to read it all in one go thoroughly worthwhile.

Id love to get your pemission to turn this into a visual novel...please get in touch with me! I have been wanting to ask this since I read it ! It made me laugh ... cry .. and made me excited I love your work! I'm always on mobile so email me please! Katiebulris gmail . Com

Heheh I've read this fic like 10xs now I think...just curious though...what was your idea of Hawke's dress supposed to look like?

Finished at last! This was an awesome story, and I'm glad that you gave us a little taste of how they've settled down after the Kirkwall madness. Very well written. I loved it!

I'm on Chapter 10 and I'm loving the story so far! I can't wait to see what happens in this love triangle... And with the Chantry. Ah! Must keep reading...