| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Invincible British Gentleman |
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Irina Hunter chapter 5 . 6/21 It's Chaser, not Catcher, and the positions on the Quidditch team should be capitalized because they're titles. I think you should use the canon pairings for Harry Potter. |
Irina Hunter chapter 3 . 6/21 What languages are the last two apologies (Duíbúqĭ and Prosti) in? Also, it should be "Praying to whatever superior being was out there, he drained the rest of his tea...". Good story so far, but you get someone to proofread for you, to catch typos and other mistakes. |
scribble33 chapter 6 . 1/31/2019 Please update? I really love this story and its really great! |
mdmpinkie9088 chapter 6 . 12/26/2017 There have not been any updates for years. Ah well. This story is so awesome anyway, I can wait ;) |
XTheBloodyFoxX chapter 6 . 12/18/2017 Please update, I need to see what happens next this is also very good. |
Escapade chapter 6 . 5/7/2016 Well... where do I start? Oh, okay. I've been absorbed with the plot since first chapter, and heaven knows how disappointed I would be if this get dropped. Hell, there'd be a massacre. Enough my blabbering, I'll just squeeze my rants into important (not that importan honestly) points. 1. Well I don't really think that drabbles is a bad idea, it's actually quite fun, but... if this story changed into drabbles, it seems... off. The plot is there, Voldemort's appearance (forgot which chapter) is there, a decent story-building is there, and I really like the way you telling the story, not too fast-paced (in my opinion). You give the readers a change to adapt with the changing environment. And the idea of Dumbledore doesn't know the concept of nations is brilliant. 2. Besides, if you choose drabbles, how are you going to expand Voldemort case? Every chapters in drabbles aren't really intertwining with each other (okay, maybe in some cases), and if it does intertwining, what's the difference than actual chapter? You already set up a premise of bigger conflict, changing it into drabbles will only erase all the anticipation and serious feeling. Plus problem with Voldemort won't just get done in one chapter, except you want to write more than 5k-7k words, in said chapter (my personal experience). Changing it into two parts? Maybe it will work, maybe it won't. But what will you do after that conflict is cleared up? End the drabbles or continue with another conflict or even side-stories? Because after Voldemort's appearance, you have to expand that, or there will be a plothole. 3. If you're afraid of writer's block, don't worry, I'm sure your readers would be more than happy to help you (including me, I have some ideas brewing inside my head). A pity I don't have an account, maybe I will make one later. I'm also like to write, and I know from experience that talking with someone about potential ideas always lit up my determination to continue the story. Just like my muse is alive again. Please don't drop this, you have a decent storyline and you got me hooked into your writing style. But, eh, maybe this review is pointless afterall, I'm so fucking late. Why couldn't I find this sooner?! Until next time. |
Y-P chapter 6 . 1/18/2016 I know it's been very long since the last update and you've probably decided to abandon this fic, but I have to tell you that this is one of the best crossovers I've ever read, and at least I would totally love if you continued the story, I wouldn't care how long it would take you to update each chapter. Anyway, whether you finish this or not, it is great work. |
Guest chapter 6 . 7/1/2015 I love this story, a shame it seems it won't be continued. |
Dragondoglover12 chapter 6 . 4/18/2015 Could you continue this story as a story, and your writing is great! I couldn't write anything half as good as this! Keep up the good work with your stories |
Ann chapter 6 . 3/1/2015 Cool! Looks like Arthur might be able to have his guest speaker after all! I don't mind if u turn this onto a drabble or keep it as an actual story. I like this idea and it'd be a Shane if u discontinued it. Best if luck! |
Ann chapter 3 . 2/27/2015 Guest speakers? Cool idea! I can't wait to serif that works out! Poor Arthur, lost in his thoughts so hermione had to awaken him to reality. Lol |
Ann chapter 1 . 2/27/2015 Nice idea! I haven't yet read a crossover where Dumbledore vows to uncover Arthur's secrets! It where Arthur demands a working cell phone and leave to attend meetings. I like this! Pretty realistic! I look forward to reading more! |
Luna25684 chapter 6 . 2/21/2015 I thought this was suppose to be Harry and Arthur, not Hermione. Also please don't pair them up! Good so far, please update soon. |
Apela chapter 6 . 2/9/2015 Anything is fine! Just please don't drop it..l |
sakura240 chapter 6 . 8/17/2014 Kura: I love this and the idea of drabbles sounds aweome! XD Berry: we hope you don't actually drop this though... Kura: please! I really love this! |